Hey guys! Sorry for taking such a long break on this project - college kind of got in the way, and I experimented with a few other series. But, I've decided to bring this one back!
If you're wondering where the last two chapters went, I deleted them. Wasn't happy with how the story went. Expect to see changes in the preceding chapters as well, I'm going to be rewriting them/making other changes. Also, I will possibly add in some original art to this series, if I find the time to draw.
Anyways, this can be sort of a feedback post I suppose. What do you guys want to see? How do you feel about the slower pace? Any areas in which I can improve? Any input you have is appreciated.
Also, I'm working on ironing out a schedule for new chapters. I'm thinking one a week, either Sunday or Friday. Either way, expect to see a new chapter in the next few days!
While I'm just thinking of fluffy romance between a cherry body and a chaste succubus, the comments providee by 'cultured' people really broaden my knowledge
Make the MC succubus train the mc to become her perfect lover and make him capable of knock her up and in order to do that she Will make him get some s*x slaves to be his training partnets and in the proces he become a demonic being with a harem, the women Will be very influential in the human World so he can focus on his training (sex, breeding, ensalvement of women, magic, etc)
You live!!
For the series...Well, it's your book. So, as long as it's good, we'll stick around...So you can write it however you want...
But if you want ideas to inspire you or some shit...I got nothing but bad ideas...You can have said ideas if you want?
I'd love to hear your ideas.
...ok...
- Turn the series into a modern fantasy wish fulfillment by ordering the succubus to train the MC in magic and go from there
- Turn the succubus into the new MC by forcing the current MC into a s*x slave basically and go from there
- Have the current MC NOT have s*x with the succubus(since succubi are supposedly deadly to males) and use her as tool to get a harem(she has succubus powers), turning the series into an 18+ harem maker
- He summons the succubus, gets contacted by other summoners and go from there, turning the series into another modern fantasy
-Edit: or a combination of the above mentioned ideas
As I said, these are just (personally bad) ideas, so use these ideas however you will...
There are no sex/mature related tags on this novel, is this is a friendly one despite the title or is it spicy?
YAY! Just write something, lots of good directions from other people
I would say he should f*ck up the ritual and the succubus escapes.
As for comments on the story so far, I would need to read more than a few chapters. Nothing bad that stands out so far ?
Very, very late on reply to this, but her escaping was actually the original intention. I initially thought of this as a scary story actually.