Okay premise, weak characters. 

Idea of the story is MC inherits a mansion and is introduced to the world of supernatural with it. Either information is lacking or something else because MC has done a number of illogical/stupid things so far. Number of grammar issues and rather detached POV, author prefers to say the character's name over and over again instead of describing the character and uses art instead of descriptions as well. Horror/suspense is mid. Not much sense of fear or terror, especially considering that the MC is drawn back to the mansion with close to no qualms or reason really. Story reads a bit like author is driving the MC to do things rather than the MC is driving themselves. 

Premise is interesting but leans on the OP side-- as in MC gains stuff without really having to work for it or develop character. Characters are weak, floppy. MC has a social life and is respected by peers but none of that is really showcased and is easily discarded by the author for the sake of the plot. MC proceeds to listen to an unknown voice and head into a dark and abandoned mansion alone while announcing her presence to any inhabitants inside. 

Maybe it'll get better. 

4 stars for the moment because it's too early to tell whether this will be utter sh*t yet.

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