I am enjoying the story but what is likely going to make me quit is the grammar. The grammar is not bad like nowhere near MTL level, but it actually makes it worse lol. The story will flow smoothly then out of nowhere there is a glaring grammatical error typically dealing with verbs or adjectives. I mean a story with potential and likable characters is being it seems inexplicably being pulled out of the immersion of the story. Well for me at least my brain doesn't autocorrect it. I drop out of immersion and then be like what? Then reread it, 💭, then oh it's supposed to be this. Once, there was a sentence that I couldn't understand, because the author didn't know how to express his thoughts in English. The author needs an editor. If finding an editor is difficult the author should try Grammarly. It has a free version which likely will be satisfactory but could always try the premium after using the free version.

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Shows great promise!Story about being trapped in a game and if you dont finish your quests in time your dead.

I like the mystery behind the creators and this 'she' the MC keeps referring to. I wish a bit more would be done with the whole memories thing though

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