Amazing story for us niche fans of reverse gender morals stories. Writing is good and doesn't have any typos and I'm not getting confused by the plot.

As a fan of having a weak protagonist who gets a bunch of over powered ladies fawning over him, this is the good stuff.

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So far the world is Amazing and the author is sticking with the gender role reversal, most stories by now forget that it is gender role reversal story and make the males overpowered and Manly this story does no such thing till now... Would recommend if your into a cute soft male with his wife's taking care of him and loving him!

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Just mid, the story is really weak, the beginning chapters are just heavy info dumping, making the protagonist's family this cool and important group in which everything crazy just happens (like a bunch of important woman all over the world chasing after the 'titos' in their school). It just gives the story wish fulfillment vibes, not to say this is also extremely unrealistic because of the chances that MC's family JUST SO HAPPENS to be really important. Honestly, just makes the protagonist seem like a child that isn't willing to be away from their family for two seconds or else he cries

I also dislike the fact he prefers to be a pathetic house husband (And yes, defaulting to house husband is historically pathetic. If your wife earns more or has a business and through the relationship you guys decide that the man should take care of the kids then it's ok. But if you go into a relationship expecting to be carried that's just sad) to being a hunter even though the world is already a Reverse gender roles, he didn't need to change his entire power system for being a husband, I understand if he simply didn't want to fight, but change specifically for a 'house husband' system? Come on man! It just makes your MC immature, lost the chance to have a gag where the protagonist insteads asks for a Army system or something (because by my earlier logic he wouldn't want to fight) and then is given the husband system.

If you wanted to do a husband system then just give it to him, don't extend it so much. It would make for a much better scene than making him cry like a little child and have some other god hand freebies (change his hunter system to husband system) so the little kid can stop it's tantrum.

Another thing if you want to read this, there are a bunch of useless throw around Filipino words that add nothing to the story and just make you disconnect. Words are used to express a message, what messages does changing uncle to 'tito' has? Just the author self inserting into the story, obviously.

In this story these insertions just make the dialogue unnatural, can you imagine two people speaking fluent Russian and then out of nowhere there's just a 'nii-san' on the middle of the dialogue because the author is Japanese or something? And the characters too apparently? I'm vehemently against this constant change in dialogue UNLESS it serves a actual purpose to the story, I'm a firm adopter of Chekhov's gun, which is a principle that every element in a story has to serve a purpose and these random 'lola' 'pa' 'tito' just makes the writing worse. And I'm not saying this because it's Filipino, I recently abandoned another Reverse gender roles story I was following because the character randomly threw words of my language around.

Lastly it's the protagonist, he's just this kid that gets moved around by all the other characters, he has no agency, everyone is paying ultra attention to him all the time because he is just such a kind and willing person (Which all his brothers seem to be? Why is he special again? Just because he got injured?), he is a Gary stu so of course everyone loves him instantly and everything always go 100% his way. It seems like the story just gives him everything, he doesn't face any struggle he himself created (Like wanting to be a house husband and suffering because he couldn't). He is literally a child. A child in which the parents buy everything they want and gets all the time to watch the iPad videos because he can't handle a single difficult thing in life.

I'm sorry for the ramble, it's just cause I can't understand what is happening and I keep trying, even though I know I will never get why someone writes like this.

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