The grammar is top tier, I even learned new words, the characters lifelike. The protagonist feels too real, it really feels like an immortal existence.
You seem really harsh on your work, so I don't know if my opinion amount to anything but I hope to see you write something again. I will be waiting if you ever feel like continuing.
The grammar is top tier, I even learned new words, the characters lifelike. The protagonist feels too real, it really feels like an immortal existence.
You seem really harsh on your work, so I don't know if my opinion amount to anything but I hope to see you write something again. I will be waiting if you ever feel like continuing.
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