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Interesting story. Saw this advertised on the r/haremfantasynovels reddit.
Overall it is well written and interesting. For myself personally I prefer male protagonists who create a harem where the yuri aspect is shared amongst the harem members but centered around the main guy. Otherwise Yuri isn't my thing. But this is written well and I love Steampunk and airships.
The litrpg portion was done well. I would recommend this for a read especially if Yuri is your thing.
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Really well written story with a fun and unusual setting.
Steam powered airships and mages plus steam power-driven cyborgs. All finished off with yuri ?
The action scenes are exciting and keep you on the edge of your seat so to speak. While the slice of life and Yuri are interesting and fun.
The characters introduced so far are interesting and mostly likeable and I look forward to seeing them develop.
Looking forward to more In the future.
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I'm not the best when it comes to writing reviews and I'm writing this on mobile but I'll try for this. Overall I would say that this a great story. With really good specifics things that stand out surprisingly well. Starting of with the world and worldbuilding it's amazing. The way that the world feels alive and has a sense that it's being lived in as opposed to just being written for the sake of being there. It keeps me entertained for more than just the plot and it properly weaves the rpg aspects into it well. Now to talk about the plot it's a good story from what has been written so far. The amount of intrigue to see of they accomplish their goals or not is keeps me wanting more story and waiting for the next chapter. The only thing I will say is that the whole over throw the government because we're a group of different people feels a bit overly grandiose and like a young adult novel similar to Divergent or The Hunger Games but that's not particularly the worst thing in the world. The s*x scenes are particularly written well and give perfectly vivid images of what's going on. Hopefully the harem grows and interact with each other as well as the protagonist. I think slightly more time can be spent to refining the rpg aspects of the story in particular power scaling and how powerful can one become because it can very easily turn into a deus ex machina situation where you are pulling perfectly tuned magic powers at the perfect time. I thoroughly enjoy this story and I hope that it is continued for a long time
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