Aiden of Felern is a very dry overly wordy story following Aiden in the magical world of Felern. i wrote it in 2019 as part of a school project, they required a minimum length of 2 pages. so is stuffed full of filler prose and fluf. its really not great and there is only a single chapter.
If you'd like to read something that sounds like it was written by a middle or highschooler, you've come to the right place. There's only one chapter but the first few paragraphs basically tell you how the story is going to go. It reads like a kid trying to cram as many synonyms as possible into each sentence. Giving this a 1-star because my ratings are based off my writing, which is a 1-star.
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