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3.3 (4 ratings)
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- Episode 1 School LifeMay 12, 2021
- Episode 0 PrologueMay 11, 2021
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Hiatus - Updated May 12, 2021
Last updated 3 years ago
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The concept is quite interesting not gonna lie, but this still needs A LOT of improvements (that is, if you update this)
2.8/5 for grammar: The grammar needs quite a lot of work, you could still understand it to an extent, but that's it
>1.9/5 for punctuations:... It's just bad... But not the worst I have seen. You can read the story to get what I mean
3.1/5 for story: Not gonna lie, the concept is the one that pulled me into this story, but frankly, everything else needs a lot of work
If you are somehow still there and is reading my review, then I recommend you fixing up your grammar and punctuations and my review would be higher
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