Amazing story! Can't wait to read the rest, but from what I can see, you have a great start, with LOTS of potential. Good luck, and I hope this gets the attention this deserves. If you want, I could help with the editing. Sorry if that seems out of line, I'm just an aspiring editor who really enjoys reading.
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Here's my discord, if you happen to be interested in an editor.
Discord: G.L.A.S.T.I.V.A.#0391
(I don't require compensation, that in itself is voluntary)
Amazing story! Can't wait to read the rest, but from what I can see, you have a great start, with LOTS of potential. Good luck, and I hope this gets the attention this deserves. If you want, I could help with the editing. Sorry if that seems out of line, I'm just an aspiring editor who really enjoys reading.
Here's my discord, if you happen to be interested in an editor.
Discord: G.L.A.S.T.I.V.A.#0391
(I don't require compensation, that in itself is voluntary)
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