This is by far, one of the best fantasy works I have read so far on Royal Road, and also the one that needs more popularity the most. And now it has come to Scribblehub, and I cannot help but to keep supporting it.
This story has one of the most well-built worlds I have read so far in Fantasy Webfiction. With every chapter adding more to the overall world and its massive history. Most of the world and its history is interconnected in some way, with more being hinted in some chapters.
The characters, how they interact with eachother, how they are related to eachother, all is written with much care and a high quality standard. Overall it has been very fun to read about the characters.
Overall this story has 2 main characters, who appear in their own Sides, named A and B, with all other viewpoints happening in the C Side chapters. Both of the main plotlines are already worthy to be a story on their own, and could be read as such, but its highly recommend to read all of the story, since the backstory from both sides does intertwine to those who notice.
Sadly even a story as excellent as this has flaws.
First the writing style, while overall being very good, there are some annoying sentences, and sometimes theres a sudden timeskip without even any incidator for it.
Secondly grammar, its mostly flawless, but there are small mistakes throughout the story. Those two flaws through did not hinder my reading experience at all. Mostly due to how well the story is written.
Third flaw is release rate, and I would want more chapters, right now! (So please increase release rate, even if its by a tiny bit)
I would thank the author for being able to create this amazing story, and the editors for making it readable to us all. Please keep on with your work!
By all means, this story rightfully deserves to come in the spotlight, so more people can read this amazing story.
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