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Chapter 21 – Double CrossApr 21, 2024
Chapter 20 – It Never RainsMar 31, 2024
Chapter 19 – Forbidden Measures – Part 2Mar 10, 2024
Chapter 18 – Forbidden Measures – Part 1Mar 9, 2024
Chapter 17 – Under Your ThumbFeb 6, 2024
Chapter 16 – ShadeNov 23, 2023
Chapter 15 – Twin FaceNov 6, 2023
Chapter 14 – MirrorJul 17, 2023
Chapter 13 – Lead EaterJul 3, 2023
Chapter 12 – ReleaseJun 17, 2023
Chapter 11 – Red, Black and Blue (Part 2)May 22, 2023
Chapter 10 – Red, Black and Blue (Part 1)May 22, 2023
Chapter 9 – AnticipationMay 1, 2023
Chapter 8 – DisrespectedApr 15, 2023
Chapter 7 – Business as UnusualApr 2, 2023

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ereinion

Status: chapter 19 – forbidden measures – part 2

Mar 12, 2024

TL;DR - Under appreciated gem

The 'side' characters and world building are the highlights for me in this work. Each character feels unique and are well described. I also enjoyed the little romantic interactions during the brief reprieve at the start of the second arc. They were 'heckin adorable' and did well to help characterize not only the two involved but some of the side chars as well. As a whole, the author is really good at painting a picture with words.

The only gripes I have are with some of the plot related things.

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One is Diego (Main protag) having very little agency (has been Princess Peach for 70% of the novel so far). This isn't necessarily bad as the novel's premise is strong people wanting him, but it has lead to me losing interest in his thread of the story during arc 3. Another is the way Plasia's bit in arc 2 started. It felt a bit contrived; other chars mentioning how suspicious things were on landing but doing nothing, and later Diego just letting the known time-bomb go off on her own back to the ship.

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Despite those few quibbles, I did enjoy reading the first two arcs immensely (honestly is worth a read for just those alone) and am willing to let the author cook with arc 3.

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