Let's start with the simple. The narrative of this story is quite good, there are some other spelling errors but nothing important. In itself, the story is well told, something for which I am grateful, although it does have a lot of room for improvement.

The next point is precisely the plot. It's not complicated, it's basically the story of two girls who are traveling the world, encountering different situations and occasionally fighting monsters or other enemies. Although there are no very big plot twists, there are certain things that are interesting and that leave you wanting to discover. But, keep in mind that this is written as a slice of life, so it is mostly the day to day and the journey of both protagonists.

The next point is both romance and lewdness. In itself it is somewhat slow in terms of romance, a little strange how it starts, but it becomes endearing as the chapters go by. If you are expecting some drama or a more intense romance, this is not for you. Things take it easy, and in its own way, it works quite well here. In the case of the lewd, it has been done quite well. It fulfills its objective, which is to describe erotic scenes where both protagonists are carried away by their desire for the other. In that sense, I feel quite satisfied.

To end. The plot, narrative and characters get along quite well. It is a story that if you take the time to read it, I am sure you will like it, as much as I have. From my point of view, I highly recommend it, especially when you feel tired of reading stories that move too fast or are too intense and you want something nice and slow. In my opinion, an 8/10

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