Let's start with the simple. The narrative of this story is quite good, there are some other spelling errors but nothing important. In itself, the story is well told, something for which I am grateful, although it does have a lot of room for improvement.

The next point is precisely the plot. It's not complicated, it's basically the story of two girls who are traveling the world, encountering different situations and occasionally fighting monsters or other enemies. Although there are no very big plot twists, there are certain things that are interesting and that leave you wanting to discover. But, keep in mind that this is written as a slice of life, so it is mostly the day to day and the journey of both protagonists.

The next point is both romance and lewdness. In itself it is somewhat slow in terms of romance, a little strange how it starts, but it becomes endearing as the chapters go by. If you are expecting some drama or a more intense romance, this is not for you. Things take it easy, and in its own way, it works quite well here. In the case of the lewd, it has been done quite well. It fulfills its objective, which is to describe erotic scenes where both protagonists are carried away by their desire for the other. In that sense, I feel quite satisfied.

To end. The plot, narrative and characters get along quite well. It is a story that if you take the time to read it, I am sure you will like it, as much as I have. From my point of view, I highly recommend it, especially when you feel tired of reading stories that move too fast or are too intense and you want something nice and slow. In my opinion, an 8/10

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This is a rough Gem, uncut if you'd like. The English (spelling, sentence structuring, right word used) could use work, but it's not so bad it's unreadable. Just keep it in mind and yes it gets better over time.

Writing:
It's good. It's not dry and it keeps me hooked. I already mentioned the issues with it (In the above text), but other than that it's a writing thats pleasant to read.

Story:
It's divided in Arc's. Each Arc is a section of the 2 MC's journey and thats what this Novel is. It's about 2 people travelling the world and experiencing a variety of events, meeting people and giving the reader a small lesson of\in? This world and its people, cultures and dangers.
I will mention that the first Arc is a mere introduction. It forms our view of Iris, the first MC. And later we get to know the 2nd MC (which I won't spoil).
Both MC's got personality, Iris is trying to step forward blindly with few people guiding her. She has her insecurities (alot of them) and is far from perfect.
The 2nd MC on the other hand knows nothing of the current world, don't know how to identify alot of emotions and acts alot like a cat (seriously, she's utterly adorable).
They both grow aswell, but it's been a slow growth so far. (Kinda).
Other than that, it's a story with a good mix of comedy, action, drama, tension etc etc.

World:
It's good, it got lots of world building, there's snippets of lore in many chapters. But it's far from overwhelming. The Author knows how to pace it.

Should you read it?
If you want a relaxing Story which is much more grounded (as weird as it sounds) than other stories.
A Story where the 2 MC's suffer setbacks. A Story with no big plot (so far) going on other than just travelling around. Then YES! Hell Yes!
Necropolis is a delightful read (despite it's english) and the 2nd MC (not Iris) is a treat :3.

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