By Drkest
Born as a second son to teh Mad King, how will Daemon Targaryen change the fate of the Targaryen dynasty? This is the story of a man who would rise up from the ashes and change the very history of this world, a man scorned and burnt by his own fat
Solid world building and dialogue, with a slow pace, but well thought out. The story has a very interesting setup as well, and well crafted characters. My only real gripe is the strong overuse of the “I have knowledge and I’m not telling you” trope. It feels tedious to see the same thing brought up with no new developments. &Nbsp;
Other than that, great work!
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