Good story, a bit slower paced than some but not to it's detriment.

MC is slightly OP but not unrealistically so, no excessive romance or smut, enjoyable fights and good worldbuilding.  Very enjoyable if you like action/fantasy with slice of life, characters feel fleshed out.

Hope this keeps up!

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A fun slice of life adventure story

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Chap. 38 Story is well written and very few grammar or spelling mistakes. Easy to read. The concept of the story and design of the world are interesting. At this point it is very slow moving but is introducing new concepts of the world. Only issue is the MC is kind of more submissive and reserved at this point. This can change obviously as time passes. There appears to be a misconception of military life, training, etc. Those parts just feel a little forced, rushed, and written by someone who doesn't know about the life. Not something easily changed but only detracts from the story a little. You wouldn't recognize this unless you were military as well. Over all the story is good. Lots of potential with the future of the story. Chap 51 the combat and battle sequences are really throwing the story off, they don't match well with someone who was trained or experienced combat. He is too reserved about killing. Some aspects about military life and actual combat are not matching up. Throws me off. Well written still, more drama style than action.

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I find the main character so bland, dull, and frustrating that it completely ruins the otherwise excellent reading experience. He isn't smart, doesn't have any strong ambitions, and is just your average Joe who gets transported into another world with better talent than everyone else.

He is overly good-natured in a weird, inconsistent way, where he will suddenly risk his life to save a random goblin, but will kill humans without remorse. He is very submissive and just goes with the flow, while the plot armor ensures he always escapes from difficult situations one way or another.

Despite this, the writing is very enjoyable. The interactions are fun and witty and the side characters have great personalities. Although most of the chapters are meaningless plot wise and too forgettable, making the pace very slow.

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Well, I guess this is my first review. The start was a little boring because it’s mostly exposition, but the author seems knowledgeable about Roman stuffs so it’s a plus. Interesting and good world building. Stats seem complicated but not hard to understand. The best point is the interactions between characters. Each characters in the legion are unique and distinguishable from one another

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I know i' not far in but it's good enough to have me hooked after 8 chapters sooo, I'm looking forward to the 8th of may when the other chapters are available again.

Caught up now at ch 107.

AMAZING story, definetly worth your time to read.

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