I know i' not far in but it's good enough to have me hooked after 8 chapters sooo, I'm looking forward to the 8th of may when the other chapters are available again.

Caught up now at ch 107.

AMAZING story, definetly worth your time to read.

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Chap. 38 Story is well written and very few grammar or spelling mistakes. Easy to read. The concept of the story and design of the world are interesting. At this point it is very slow moving but is introducing new concepts of the world. Only issue is the MC is kind of more submissive and reserved at this point. This can change obviously as time passes. There appears to be a misconception of military life, training, etc. Those parts just feel a little forced, rushed, and written by someone who doesn't know about the life. Not something easily changed but only detracts from the story a little. You wouldn't recognize this unless you were military as well. Over all the story is good. Lots of potential with the future of the story. Chap 51 the combat and battle sequences are really throwing the story off, they don't match well with someone who was trained or experienced combat. He is too reserved about killing. Some aspects about military life and actual combat are not matching up. Throws me off. Well written still, more drama style than action.

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