Overall: I love the feel of it, it fits the genre really well! I can't wait to read more. It isnt something I normally see on this site.

Style: Tbh I am giving it a higher score because its a breath of fresh air after all the male MC or lit rpg's I have been reading. The pov works really well and has given me some ideas on how to handle them it in my own story.

Grammar: Haven't seen or heard anything! I may not be the best at catching this though

Story: Feels really good. It fits other I have read really well with a fun spin of being a kpop group. I dont want to spoil much but there are more then generic zombies and not even just the regular off shoots.

Character: They each have their own personalities problems and approaches as well as some interpersonal drama. Not everyone always gets along perfectly and works like a military unit which is great because that bothers me in other stories. Not everyone always getting along perfectly is a realistic depiction of human relationships. It can also create tension and suspense, as readers wonder how the characters will resolve their differences.

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