By Razmatazz
[I was reincarnated in a fantasy world as the manifestation of absolute void — the Black Knight, and my goal is to return the destitute, sickly, youngest-born princess, who is kind of a loser, to her throne because it beats doing nothing]
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The story itself isn't bad, it's well described, but it has an element that I just hate.
The MC has no memory of his life as Ork and the way he behaves is human, more than human, it's that of a scared, memoryless, fearful human. And NOBODY, NOBODY REALLY notices anything wrong with it, which leads me to believe that the original Ork must have been a pretty sh*tty Ork.
But as I said, the story looks promising, for those who can ignore what I mentioned.
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The MC isn't that likeable, he is cowardly, paranoid, and pathetic but even though some people like Sahi and the Shaman noticed no one seems to care. The pacing is weird, the reader jumps from scene to scene in an abrupt manner sometimes. I'm seven chapters in and the only semblance of a possible plotline is the fact that he is
an Immah’tar
I thought I'd give this webnovel a try but it seems to be missing chunks, it wasn't until I read the description a second time that I realized that parts of the story are missing intentionally as tthey are patreon exclusives, oh well, I guess I'll drop this.
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