I've loved your story so far but I find that you repeat a lot this phrase ''but a testament to his resilience and adaptability'' or other similar ones.
For the rest I really like the way you write, since it helps me a lot to immerse myself in the story itself.
10/10
PS: I think you should remove all the tags that have not been presented or are far from being presented such as guilds, elves and etc as they give some clues that can ruin future surprises
honestly, I really like the story. I got a little worried at chapter 30 since it seemed like it was coming to an end, but naw, it was just the end of an ARC! Cant wait to read the rest of the story as it progresses!
I've loved your story so far but I find that you repeat a lot this phrase ''but a testament to his resilience and adaptability'' or other similar ones.
For the rest I really like the way you write, since it helps me a lot to immerse myself in the story itself.
10/10
PS: I think you should remove all the tags that have not been presented or are far from being presented such as guilds, elves and etc as they give some clues that can ruin future surprises
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honestly, I really like the story. I got a little worried at chapter 30 since it seemed like it was coming to an end, but naw, it was just the end of an ARC! Cant wait to read the rest of the story as it progresses!
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