The story is delightful.. It's filled with adventure is well written. The Author Still lacks some confidence and as a result Is attacked by trolls. However, I suggest you read the story for yourself and you will be most Pleased.

Yes, some bad things Happened to the hero. Yes it's unpleasant. That's why it's a Good story. The character is not Mary Sue. One person in particular. Seems be Upset with that.

The characters real refreshing And had bad things happen.

Story will make you cry and laugh.. I cannot think of a higher Recommendation.

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RoseWinegarden

Status: chapter 22 – memories and goodbyes

Sep 2, 2023

it was good, a bit spinning of its wheels, but left me wondering how the gl plot would play out, but author does a big stinky writing nono

Spoiler

kills the pet

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and if you understand that rule you get why im not sticking around after that.

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Warrior21st

Status: Chapter 33 - Turbulent Interlude

Sep 1, 2023

Interesting premise, if not a bit slow paced. Loses some traction here and there, but otherwise a good read.

Update C33: It's still good. The fight scenes are fantastically narrated and it finally looks like the gl is getting started, but it's still a bit muddy whether the MC is pining for Lune or the other way around as they seem to be just friends still. Is she even the romantic interest? Maybe a slow romance tag?

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mainzmainzmainz

Status: chapter 7 – companions

Sep 3, 2023

A lot of things do not make any sense in this story. It is like you are reading a movie with all those movie plot holes. But I like the way the author writes. Just do not expect a story that makes sense.

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