A sudden dramatic change in one's life would lead to drastic changes. What if that change were to provide something unexpectedly great and exciting events and changes? After a tragic event, Foin was granted a new life full of excitement. Will he manage to correct what he has endured?
It needs some work, but a dew editing passes and more details added would benefit the story. All that being said there is something here. It just needs the time to grow into something beautiful.
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I like a lot. There are small forced steps at the beginning but if you ignore them you can enjoy the story well. Things happen out of the MC's sight that leave one waiting for development.
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