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[Liana POV]
CLICK!
TIIIIIIIINNNNGGG!
Looking at the other robot shark it seems that it was quite heavily damaged...
Seems like the mercenaries started to learn how to deal with it. I decided to help and aimed my gun at the robot the mercenaries were fighting...
Sadly we don't really have a lot of time now...
"Welp time to wrap this...hm?"(liana)
TIIIIINNNNGGG!
WUSSSHHHHH!
"Uwa!?"(???)
"Ugah!"(???)
The robot shark suddenly jumped up high and then started flying...
Leaving a blast off wind behind knocking the two close-range mercenaries off...
Good thing they didn't fall overboard...
Wussshhhhh!....
The robot started circling the place...
Then I saw it's bottom head lighting up...
Oh lord...
TIIINNGG!
It's circling back towards us...
I looked at the mercenaries...
"MOVE!"(Liana)
Bren looked at me and nodded...
I looked below me noticing that the train carriage has completely stopped on the tracks...
"Everyone get out of the train!"(Bren)
Without a second thought, everyone started jumping off from the rooftop...
I looked at the robot shark flying towards me with top speed...
"Sigh*..."(Liana)
Click!...
I grabbed something that was attached to my shorts...
It's a metal stick...
And I readied my self as...
Tiiiiinnnnggg!
PIIUUUSS!
a laser shoots out from its head...
I raised the metal stick to the front and...
Click!PIUS!WONG!
PLIIIINNNNGGGGGG!
The end of the metal started lighting up and then a long straight bright line formed...
Yeap what I took out is a lightsaber!...
The lightsaber hit the incoming laser cutting it into two as it hit my lightsaber...
PLIIIINNNNGGGGGG....
BOOOOOM!
I can hear explosions behind me as I continued cutting the laser with my lightsaber...
TIIINNGG!
I can see the robot getting closer to me...
Bad, It's trying to ram me...
I smiled...
Step....
I take a step back as the robot kept moving closer and closer to me...
I was at the end of the rooftop so pretty much I just need to...
STEP!
Jump down...
WUSSSHHHHH!
Step!
I landed on the snowy ground as the robot flew right past me...
The robot leaves behind a wave of wind on top of the carriage roof...
CREEEEEEK....
I quickly moved away from the carriage as it was about to fall on top of me...
BANG.....
the carriage falls right in front of me and snow flew everywhere making a cloud all around me...
Wooong!...
I slice the cloud with my lightsaber and looked at where the robot was...
The robot was still flying in the sky circling us...
"Hey! Is everybody alright!"(Bren)
It seems like Bren is rallying everyone and checking if they are all fine, better move there...
"Hm?"(Bren)
Bren looked at me and smiled...
"You seemed to be fine"(Bren)
I nod at him and looked at where the robot it...
"Damn! What do we do now?"(???)
I looked at one of the mercenaries talking...
"Rush stay calm"(???)
"Like hell, I can! We're stuck here and we don't have any means to even get back!"(Rush)
"Now now don't say that, we have her on our side at least...."(???)
The two of them then looked at me and stood still as they saw me looking at them...
The quickly turned their heads away...
Well, that's funny...
But...
Flick!
I flick my hand and put them beside my right ear...
"Eli are you here yet?"(Liana)
{Psss* ah yes almost there just need to shake them off... Psss* yeap don't worry I'm coming there right now!}(Elizabeth)
Then she closed the call...
I slowly lowered my hand and narrowed my eyes...
I hope Eli is okay...
"Hey look!"(???)
One of the mercenaries sad that while pointing up...
We all looked up and saw the robot coming right at me...
I then started hearing a different noise somewhere else...
I looked there for a moment and looked at the robot again...
"Scatter!"(Bren)
The mercenaries started to scatter but I didn't...
I'm just staring at the incoming robot...
"What are you doing!? Quickly move!"(Bren)
I raised my hand saying an I'm okay sign as I looked at the robot...
Pussssss....
I can hear it coming closer and closer...
Tiiiiinnnnggg!...
The robot seems to not notice it coming...
Bad move pall...
PUUUSSSSSSSSSS!......
BOOOOOOOMM!
Suddenly a missile hit the robot from the left side...
TIIINNGG!
The robot started to fall down but then...
PIUUUUSSSSS! BOOOOOOOOM!
BOOOOOOOOOOM!
WUSSSHHHHH!
Another missile came in and hit the robot again...
The robot then exploded in the air...
And something big went past it...
Click!
{Psss*...the Calvary is here!}(Elizabeth)
Yeap its Elizabeth! she was piloting a giant black plane...
The shape of the plane was like the word W and it has some features from some series...
WUSSSHHHHH!
She quickly circles the plane around...
TIIINNGG!
TIIINNGG!
I heard something on the distance and looked there to see more robot sharks moving in...
Eli moves in to intercept...
PACHUSSSSSS!
PACHUSSSSSS!
BRRRRRRRRRRRRR!
There are around 6 ballistic missiles attached on the wings and More on the inside of the plane and also a Vulcan attached on the front nose of the plane...
BOOOM!BOOM!
BATABATABATABATA!
the two robots were hit by the missiles and bullets as the plane easily flew past them...
The plane was agile for its size the size which was even bigger than the robot...
Around the size of a stealth bomber...
Tiiiii.....BANG!BANG!BANG!BANG!
there's also an autocannon attached at the middle top of the plane that can rotate 360°...
A brilliant plane if I must say...
It splendidly destroyed the two robot shark heads...
Eli turned around the plane by doing roll mid-air...
Is she flexing?...
She slowly hovered the plane above my position and slowly lowered it down right in front of me...
The plane uses VTOL to land...
It's pretty convenient for easy landing...
"Sigh* quite an entrance there Eli"(Liana)
[Hehehe I did my best!](Elizabeth)
As the plane touched the ground Eli quickly appeared on my hud again...
Pachuu....
I can see the AFT Cargo door open on the back of the plane and welcome me in...
I looked behind me to see all the mercenaries staring at me and the plane with big eyes and mouths opened...
I giggled...
"Hey let's go now!"(Liana)
I quickly moved inside the plane. The Inside is like a small yet long room...
There are long bench seats attached to the left and right sides of the wall. In the middle-end of the room, there's a small ladder align to the middle of the room that leads to the turret. In the middle of the room was...
Well, we will talk about that later but for now, it was another small vehicle shape like a motor with no wheels...
I looked at the front and saw a door leading to the cockpit...
I quickly moved towards the cockpit door but I looked back for a moment to confirm that every mercenary was on the plane...
My plane can carry 12 people for its size and weight...
As the last mercenaries boarded my plane, I pressed a button on the wall to close the AFT cargo door and went into the cockpit...
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That's a big flex for a big plane
Thanks for the chapter!~
Good luck with college~
Seems like the mercenaries started to know how to deal with it now I aimed my gun at the robot the mercenaries are fighting...
Seems like the mercenaries started to learn how to deal with it. I decided to help and aimed aimed my gun at the robot the mercenaries were fighting... {Makes more sense than the original sentence}
Good thing they didn't fell overboard...
fell => fall
Bren looked at me and nod...
nod => nodded
I looked below me the train carriage have completed stopped on the track...
I looked below me noticing that the train carriage had completely stopped on the tracks...
I grabbed something that was attack to my shorts...
attack => attached
The end of the metal started lighting up and then a long straight bright line form...
form => formed
I can hear explosion behind me as I continue cutting the laser with my light saber...
explosion => explosions
continue => continued
I can see the robot getting closer bad close to me...
It's trying to rammed me...
I can see the robot getting closer to me...
Bad, it is trying to ram me...
"Dam! What do we do now?"(???)
Dam => Damn {A 'Dam' is something that holds back water, 'Damn' is a swear word}
"Now now don't say that we have her on outside at least...."(???)
that we have her on outside => that, we have her on our side
I'm just starting at the incoming robot...
starting => staring
Yeap its Elizabeth! she was riding a giant black plane...
riding => piloting
the two robot was hit by the missiles and bullets as the plane went past them easily...
two robot was hit => two robots were hit
the plane went past them easily... => the plane easily flew past them...
The plane was agile for its size the size is even bigger than the robot...
The plane was agile for its size which was even bigger than the robot...
there's also an auto canon attack at the middle top of the plane that can rotate 360°...
auto canon attack at the middle => auto cannon attached at the middle
It splendidly destroy the two robot shark heads...
destroy -> destroyed
She then slowly hover the plane on top of me and slowly lowered it down right in front of me...
She slowly hovered the plane above my position and slowly lowered it down right in front of me...
The plane use the way a Hydra plane land...
The plane used VTOL to land...
As the plane touch the ground Eli quickly appeared on my hub again...
touch => touched
hub => hud
I can see the plane back opening and welcoming me...
I can see the AFT cargo door open on the back of the plane and welcome me in...
I looked behind me to see all the mercenaries with mouth opened and big eyes...
I looked behind me to see all the mercenaries staring at me with big eyes and their mouths open...
I quickly move inside the plane the Inside is like a small long room...
I quickly moved inside the plane. The inside is like a small yet long room...
There are long seats on the left and right side of the wall, in the middle end of the room there's a small ladder leading to the top turret and on the middle was...
There are long seats {could also be called 'bench seats'} attached to the left and right side of the wall. In the back of the room there is a small ladder aligned to the middle of the room that lead to the top turret. In the middle of the room was...
Well talked about that later but it was another small vehicle shape like a motor with no wheels...
Well, we will talk about it later but for now it was another small vehicle shaped like a motor with no wheels... {I am not entirely sure what you mean by 'motor with no wheels' but my best guess is something like a hovercar or hoverbike}
I quickly move towards the cockpit door but I looked back for a moment to confirm that every mercenaries is in the plane...
move => moved
every mercenaries is in the plane... => every mercenary was in the plane...
As the last mercenaries board my plane I closed the hatch by pressing a button on the wall and move to the cockpit...
As the last of the mercenaries boarded my plane, I pressed a button on the wall to close the AFT cargo door and went into the cockpit...
{Be careful with the spell check that you are using, it seems to be changing your 'attach' words to 'attack'.}
{Also spell check can mark some things wrong that are correct so there is that too. Ex: 'Hovercar' 'Hoverbike'}
AFT -> aft (fore / aft) (front / rear)