"You have to create a man for me, with whom I can live and exchange the affection that is so necessary for my existence. Only you can do it, and I demand it as a right that you must not deny me."
The monster said this with conviction, as if it were a request that had been brewing for a long time and had just found the right moment to express it out loud.
"And why not a woman?" Victoria asked in return, almost as a reflex, without thinking too much about it.
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Welcome, mortals, to the queer Frankenstein retelling nobody asked for, but that I needed to write.
This is really good, so far everything feels perfect.
Very strong wordcount wordcount per page.
A clear, interesting, and engaging writing style. The pacing feels steady and slow but draws you into the characters and story. Grammar wise I didn't notice any errors although I also didn't go looking for any. Regardless it feels pristine and well polished.
A very creative and original (at least to my minor knowledge) re-imagining of Frankenstein.
Great characters with depth and room for growth.
All in all, 7k words in and it shows great promise.
Really hits the spot! I can't wait for more.
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