So you are my first ever review on this site. The book is great! Grammar and proper sentence structure could use some help here and there. However we all need to start somewhere. Just know that I shall be watching your career with great interest.

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quite disappointing, the beginning seems interesting but soon things start to get strange, the protagonist apparently has the mind of a child, she treats the world and events as if everything were just a casual game, which really takes away a lot of the immersion, but what really made me drop was the encounter with the lionkin village, every interaction between her and the character that appears later is very bad, both the MC and the girl act as if they were characters from a third-rate tsundere school anime, but the gravity of the events that have just happened is really great and this means that even now, in what seemed to be the first time that the story was going to take itself a little bit seriously, everything falls apart, in fact if the author embraced comedy it wouldn't be a problem. What bothers me is that he writes as if it were supposed to be something serious and then there are the sh*tty scenes in the middle of the event, making it neither comedy nor serious, it just gets really annoying.

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An enjoyable story with a very few grammatical errors with a polite author that does their best, thanks for the hard work and enjoyable read

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