VOW, Veil Of Worlds. Merely another game in the industry, just that it's the most advanced technologically, one that gives you much more freedom than any other. That's the mindset a seemingly ordinary student takes when logging in for the first time, and that's the mindset he... or maybe she very quickly realizes to be too simple, too lacking. Because the feelings and changes she herself experiences and sees in others might just make a part of another, much greater truth.
A story placed in a world of VOW, a new game made with full dive technology, and the world hundreds of years after Earth became but a reminder for future generations and humanity found their new homes among the stars. And where far more than desolate systems lie, even more so behind the veil that is the fabric of reality.
Story mostly from one POV, first person perspective.
The cover art is a cut from original work that doesn't belong to me. If you have an issue with it, contact me and I will take it down. It is though what was originally the base of Helia's appearance, so I'll keep it here until I get a proper artwork done. It will also be in the glossary (careful of spoilers there).
I honestly don't need to wait for more chapters to review this. The amount of effort and time taken to create this book is obvious and if I don't give this a 5-Star review it'd be rude. The work put into the Game aspect is immense and unique (according to me, someone else might not find it unique who knows), not only that though. It also captures your attention and every little bit mentioned reveals so much more, tells us so much more about what COULD be and makes me want to read on.
In all honesty, it's a damn good book at 3 chapters and I can't wait for the fourth.
To LilRora, the author, keep up the good work and thanks for the chapters!
This book has a lot of effort, and I can see a can see some cute interactions in the future between the main couple.
NEED MORE! This story's vibe just presses all the right buttons for me, it's extremely hard for me to find stories with the right vibe, there are ones close to it but power punch punches it just right. It's a good story overall in my opinion, but chapter 9 and 10 were way to draw out for my tastes like they could have been only 1/3 barely lost any of their overall meaning and 3/4 with absolutely no loss in my opinion. I much empathize how much I love the story though, it's in my top 10 of the 400 good stories I've read since the start of COVID.
I was in doubt but the story is good even though some things are similar to another story, I see potential in it and I'm willing to be patient to see what comes next.
The romance is good, the power progression seems funnier than just levels, MC's character looks interesting one way or another plus there's some very very necessary violence in a so called imersive virtual world.