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Fujoshitothecore
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Thank you for the review. On what do you think I can improve? I don't rewrite, so the story will remain as it is, but it will be nice to know, for future stories.
Well you asking me for my opinion is a pleasure for me but to tell the truth i haven't written any kinds of novels etc. myself so it is a bit difficult for me.Even so i think u can add a bit more drama in ur stories with enough dog blood to hook ur readers added the smut and i guess that is all that requires.The comedy part is alright i have to say that.
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