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Just a slightly bitter, ancient hermit just trying to keep himself entertained.
I may occasionally write stories or delete them. I try to give constructive feedback but I do get frustrated from time to time, I am sorry for that but I am just trying to help more prolific writers improve and encourage new writers to grow.
Okay not seen any reactions to recent chapters so I am guessing I missed the mark a bit, Chapter three is going to be rewritten to include the details of the women's transformations.
Chapter five is going to be the big Renee reveal and a visit to an old friend.
sorry, I've been busy and haven't been able to read much lately.
Only blaming myself on this as I did not go into detailed transformations for the girls, William is the main character and Renee is a major character but has only been named and not shown.
Lastly WIlliam while looking like a succubus is not one and has not dated since college. so no smut scenes planned for now.
Chapter two is now live and glossary keeps growing. now I have to create the cast of the next chapter.
I am a bit mad at myself right now, I was working on chapter 2 and ended up coming up with idea's for what the Chaos shards are, and they are completely unimportant to this story.
They are the dark reflection of the Primodials and frankly closer to the outer gods. I am calling them the Nameless Gods as they are only known by their titles and do not have a name in any sense of the word just purpose. Also check out the glossary fun background info added.
Yea, it happens to me too when I have more ideas than I can fit into a story. I just store them for later :)
Chapter 1 submitted it is not the chapter 1 I was working on but this seemed a better place to put this chapter.
About halfway through the first chapter, there are going to be sometime jumps back forth for the first few chapter but only by a few days as a few of the characters tell their stories and the story behind the spa itself unfolds.
Also, there will be one chapter set 25,000 years ago as well as mention of events roughly 15 billion years in the past that I need to do a lot of research for. hopefully tomorrow for next chapter release.
Check out the glossary for extra info.
A weird question, so far I have been doing my writing here on scribble hub on the website instead of uploading with handwritten rough drafts and printing out the finished chapters. How bad of an idea is this?
it's entirely up to you. I write in yWriter (current is 7, i believe). it has a fairly decent built in spellcheck and it highlights characters, places, and items. But i run everything I write through free Grammarly, which isn't ideal, but it's quite helpful.
Of course it's what works for you. I write in google doc, it makes it easy to switch between devices (pc, tablet, phone). And when copy-pasting text into scribble hub, all formatting is preserved.
Menipoheru but if a dinosaur only device I use is a gaming laptop or I occasionally dig out my older semi working laptop that needs a new battery but the case does not want to separate and techs are scared to try to pry it apart.
That's the convenience of google doc that it works on almost anything. I can do all my writing on my phone. Not always too handy, but still possible. And you don't need to sync your devices, google does it for you. It also allows app scripts that I use for bulk editing, format conversions, or just statistics gathering (I made a script that runs once a day to count words and store it for the chart). And it's free 
Thank you kindly for the follow. 😀
Thank you kindly for checking out my book. 😁
I am going to take the time and thank you for SO much feedback. You have taken so much of your time that you didn't need to in order to ask and clarify things within Vivienne.
I want you to know I appreciated every post,
Thank you
You are very welcome I truly enjoyed the depth you put into each of your characters even the ones that had fairly short lives in the story.
Well, the good News is on the last release day for Vivienne - an hour after "Sylvie" will launch. So far the feedback I have gotten over the initial 3 chapters is positive. I do hope you join in with her romantic adventure as well
Thanks for the follow!
Hey I wanted to take a minute to say thank you for helping me catch the things i needed to work on and all the very funny comments its really gives me motivation to not scrap the story so thanks so much i appreciate it :D
Thank you so much for your feedback and kind words. I loved it so much that I wanted to tell you personally.
Okay Last Goodbye is finished.
I apologize but I rewrote the ending for first chapter of This is my last Goodbye along with writing the last chapter. I hope everyone enjoys.
I just started a new short story it will only be two chapters and only a single character it will be a lot depressing with hopefully an exciting ending.
Immortality is not all it's cracked up to be.
Also, my other story has a new chapter up, thinking about changing the story title.
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Just a slightly bitter, ancient hermit just trying to keep himself entertained.
I may occasionally write stories or delete them. I try to give constructive feedback but I do get frustrated from time to time, I am sorry for that but I am just trying to help more prolific writers improve and encourage new writers to grow.
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