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atomically
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Joined: May 24, 2023
Followers: 41
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Comments: 516

Just a newbie author trying to write fun stuff that people like.

Wolfpup · Jan 19, 2025

I was wondering when you will be updating the chapters that are marked as drafts that you had released before you went on break for the holidays.

atomically · Author · Jan 19, 2025

Yes.  I'll try to get to them in the next week or so.  Thanks.

atomically · Author · Feb 7, 2025

The chapters have been updated. Mostly minor changes or corrections.

Hopefully I haven't introduced more typos.  :)

atomically · Author · Jan 3, 2025

Happy New Year.   Let's hope it's a good one.

The next Bonny chapter is up. Probably just one chapter next week, but I'll try to increase the release schedule after that.

atomically · Author · Aug 9, 2024

It looks like I became famous with a few new readers in the last couple of days. I'm not sure I deserve that. Maybe infamous would be better. 

I started working on a second story several months ago and hoped I would be able to start publishing it by the time I hit this milestone, but it's not ready yet. I'll keep working on it and hopefully have it soonish.

Thanks for the reads and follows. I hope you all know how awesome you are.  clear.pngclear.pngclear.png

Talmus · Jun 11, 2024

Okay I took the time to actually read chapter 9 of my story I did not realize how bad it was and I rewrote the last two third of it to get rid of repetition and fill in some badly needed details. misspelling and punctuation also got a clean up.

atomically · Author · Jun 12, 2024

Sounds good.  I'll give it a read.  

I find things I want to change pretty much every time I reread a chapter of mine. It just never ends.  clear.png

atomically · Author · Jun 3, 2024

I just realized it's been a little over a year since I published the first chapter of Bonny, long enough to free Zeal from her oath. clear.png

I didn't expect the story to be this long when I started. Writing was an escape - a way to deal with depression and pain. Fortunately, it got me through 2023 and I'm feeling much better.

Unfortunately, the last several months have been tough in other ways and my writing output has sucked since Dec. I'll work on getting that back up this summer. Wish me luck.

Talmus · Jun 4, 2024

Tosses a jar of four-leaf clovers, four upright horseshoes, and a set of acrylic rabbits feet.

Talmus · Apr 16, 2024

Oh, hey I started a new story it is hopefully going to be mostly a fun transformation story. need to do some research on vacation hot springs/spas and Sumerian/Mesopotamian myths. 

atomically · Author · Apr 16, 2024

I'll give it a read.  :)

atomically · Author · Jan 1, 2024

Happy New Year!  May we all have a peaceful and uninteresting one.

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atomically · Author · Aug 21, 2023

Today I made it to "well-known author". That feels like some kind of achievement. clear.png

I really wasn't sure about this story, or posting here, when I started, but decided to push forward anyway, no matter how much I hate my writing. I hoped the story would be fun enough to look past newbie mistakes, especially in the early chapters. 

I'm finally starting to feel like I might really be succeeding at this.

I updated Bonny's title and description. It seemed like a good time.

Thanks all.  clear.png
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Talmus · Aug 15, 2023

Think of it as a crazy old hermit's, last joke on the world.

Yes, I will go through and spell check and fix sentences.

Talmus · Aug 14, 2023

Hate to bother you but would really like to see what you think of my story This is my last goodbye. I am a little unsure on part of the ending as I am not sure about the results of the fourth pulse as anything beyond racial transformations and the return of magic may be too much.

atomically · Author · Aug 15, 2023

It's a fun short story, but leaves more questions that answers.  I think it would work better as a prologue or myth for a world rather than an isolated story.

Him forgetting to eat lunch is funny. If it were mine, I would do another read through/edit to check for typos and punctuation.

I think the ending is fine. You could be a little more vague on each pulse and just describe the after affects.

aidan_lo · Aug 9, 2023

Thanks for the follow! 

atomically · Author · Aug 9, 2023

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John_Owl · Aug 8, 2023

Hey there! thanks for the follow! I'm really enjoying reading Bonny on my vacation. and hopefully I'll be able to return soon with more writing!

atomically · Author · Aug 9, 2023

Glad you're enjoying it. I hope to have time to read through some of your stories next week.  :)

Alwaysrollsaone · Jul 3, 2023

thanks for the awesome review!!  the saliva is based on the D&D succubus kiss

It is called draining kiss in D&D and I sort of manipulated it as a tool a succubus uses to rupture the aether core of the victim since it kills its target in D&D.  

atomically · Author · Jul 3, 2023

YW, and thanks for the comment. clear.png

I just went and checked the stat page and that does make sense, especially how you have it setup with aether cores.

I edited the review to fix the formatting and typos, as well as update my comment based on new info.

Bald-san · Jun 24, 2023

That's one of  the best synopsis I have seen, I shall strive to make one that creative one day.

atomically · Author · Jun 24, 2023

NGL, I read this as sarcasm. Someone else convinced me it wasn't.

So, if you're sincere, thank you. clear.png

Assuming you're talking about Bonny, it's gone through several iterations since I started. Once I finished the Intro Arc, I tried to distill it down to the main points covered, then later added rough %s to set some expectations for new readers.

atomically · Author · Jun 24, 2023

For Cultish, I tried to keep it minimalistic. There's a better summary of Cultish in the Achievement notice between Bonny chaps 24 and 25, than on the title page of the story itself. I wanted to keep it bleak and depressing, without author intrusion.

Talmus · Jun 7, 2023

Who can resist a cute bunny girl here are a few stories I have enjoyed:

Paul_Michaels "i got isekai'd, well shyt", "The Soul Mirror"

Premeir "I want to lay the very best!"

Agdistis "Rebirth of the Nephilim"

Jamminrabbit: "I am Succubus" 

atomically · Author · Jun 7, 2023

Thanks.  I've seen a couple of them, but will add the others. :)

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