Just a newbie author trying to write fun stuff that people like.
Oh, hey I started a new story it is hopefully going to be mostly a fun transformation story. need to do some research on vacation hot springs/spas and Sumerian/Mesopotamian myths.
I'll give it a read. :)
Happy New Year! May we all have a peaceful and uninteresting one.
Today I made it to "well-known author". That feels like some kind of achievement.
I really wasn't sure about this story, or posting here, when I started, but decided to push forward anyway, no matter how much I hate my writing. I hoped the story would be fun enough to look past newbie mistakes, especially in the early chapters.
I'm finally starting to feel like I might really be succeeding at this.
I updated Bonny's title and description. It seemed like a good time.
Thanks all.
-a
Think of it as a crazy old hermit's, last joke on the world.
Yes, I will go through and spell check and fix sentences.
Hate to bother you but would really like to see what you think of my story This is my last goodbye. I am a little unsure on part of the ending as I am not sure about the results of the fourth pulse as anything beyond racial transformations and the return of magic may be too much.
It's a fun short story, but leaves more questions that answers. I think it would work better as a prologue or myth for a world rather than an isolated story.
Him forgetting to eat lunch is funny. If it were mine, I would do another read through/edit to check for typos and punctuation.
I think the ending is fine. You could be a little more vague on each pulse and just describe the after affects.
Hey there! thanks for the follow! I'm really enjoying reading Bonny on my vacation. and hopefully I'll be able to return soon with more writing!
Glad you're enjoying it. I hope to have time to read through some of your stories next week. :)
thanks for the awesome review!! the saliva is based on the D&D succubus kiss
It is called draining kiss in D&D and I sort of manipulated it as a tool a succubus uses to rupture the aether core of the victim since it kills its target in D&D.
YW, and thanks for the comment.
I just went and checked the stat page and that does make sense, especially how you have it setup with aether cores.
I edited the review to fix the formatting and typos, as well as update my comment based on new info.
That's one of the best synopsis I have seen, I shall strive to make one that creative one day.
NGL, I read this as sarcasm. Someone else convinced me it wasn't.
So, if you're sincere, thank you.
Assuming you're talking about Bonny, it's gone through several iterations since I started. Once I finished the Intro Arc, I tried to distill it down to the main points covered, then later added rough %s to set some expectations for new readers.
For Cultish, I tried to keep it minimalistic. There's a better summary of Cultish in the Achievement notice between Bonny chaps 24 and 25, than on the title page of the story itself. I wanted to keep it bleak and depressing, without author intrusion.
Who can resist a cute bunny girl here are a few stories I have enjoyed:
Paul_Michaels "i got isekai'd, well shyt", "The Soul Mirror"
Premeir "I want to lay the very best!"
Agdistis "Rebirth of the Nephilim"
Jamminrabbit: "I am Succubus"
Thanks. I've seen a couple of them, but will add the others. :)
Hi, all. Any suggestions for favorite stories I should read?
I'm not sure if you will like them they are a futanari smut category that i found entertaining to read they are
1.F*tanari Adventure Quest by puella_magi
2.New Life As An Ecchi Girl With A “Big Surprise” by YuujiEveryleaf
3.Lilith: Origin of Succubi by Saine
4.The Legendary Monster Layer! by blakebalatron
5.I Want To Lay the Very Best! by Premier
Thanks, I added them. :)
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