Wanted to stop by and say thank you for the attention you are giving my story! After so many words it’s easy for me to get a bit blind to them. Working on fixing the errors you have pointed out. Other than the grammatical mistakes, I hope you are enjoying the story. Thanks again.
I really appreciate the time you've taken to read over all my stuff and point out errors, you've been a huge help and I'm working to fix them now. Thank you.