I am officially nudging you. You have read this far, you should either follow me or add Astraology. I have loved your posts and I am hoping to keep our conversations going. So nudge, nudge. Just go past chapter 12 it will be worth it.
I actually did read through the rest of what you have up but I was half asleep and started getting really mixed up on the various groups and their lore so I've been meaning to go over it again when I'm more coherent.
But yeah, actually! good stuff. Was genuinely worried you might kill off a few of the characters in the big fight scene.