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Thanks for the constructive review, the story has loads of plot holes due to poor planning and I agree that the characters are shallow. Unfortuantly im in too deep to fix any of these problems without a re-write so ill just have to keep this in mind for my next novel. 
That's fine. To be honest, I do that with my own material too. But then I'll get too insecure about the plotholes I notice, and I'll either drop the book or just never post it.
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