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Thank you for the review. and an extensive summary without any spoilers to boot. The only thing I wanted to confirm - the MC name is Erf. Did I make a mistake in calling him the other way somewhere?
Edited, sorry my bad
It is all good, I was just afraid my own autocorrect got the best of me once and for all.
If you aren't going to read the synopsis, and then stop reading before the story even really gets going all because you wanted to give some diatribe that you think makes you special, I pity you. A far more beta cuck move than anything one of my MCs would even capable of. I'd say thanks for the review, but the only thing that I can be thankful for is that at least it means I won't see your name in my recent read list.
The review is based on 14 chapters, so it should be clear for anyone who reads it, that it does not cover the whole story.
The author is not his characters, and I reviewed them, not you. They are fictional, you are not, I did not have any intention to compare you with them, and only wrote my opinion about some fictional characters, that doesn't mean I feel the same about you. What I did is in no way special, only ordinary, the same could be said about me. Good luck.
Whew boy. Your review really saved me from that bullet. If you don't want people to think he's a beta cuck, don't threaten it! 😆 I'm not about to read about some almost cuck for half a novel. That's a charcter development I can live happily without. Worst thing you can do is intentionally make your protagonist unlikeable with the misguided goal of originality to the point you have to over correct for it.
Hey there, I really appreciate the review for Innocent Devil's Harem, and especially your fairness about it.
I just wanted to bring up a few of the points you mentioned, and explain what's going on (since it sounds like you won't be reading anymore, hence spoilers won't matter to you).
(I'll have to do this is multiple comments, due to the character limit.)
(8) So, upon receiving this talk from the true succubus (who wants him to remain good, unlike all other incubi), our MC realizes he's already become really selfish, suddenly realizing that he's made decisions about his sister that he would not have made prior to everything.
Boom. Big change, as everything comes together.
(9) Now we have a character who has 'survived the succubus' from selfishness, and 'become self-absorbed' via selfishness, only to get to a point where he is more 'alpha male,' and has more self-respect (which I know was your main problem), and at the same time, he comes to realize that he's also grown 'more evil' by slowly becoming more selfish.
It is at this point that we have a character that you would probably love.
(10) He would not put up with his women having sleeping with others. He knows what he wants, and isn't hesitant to communicate it, and he wields exceptional power (more than just the compulsion - so much more), and yet is at a point where he's not in danger of becoming evil, like pretty much all other incubi who are basically true monsters, due to the influence of their powers.
(11) So, all that being said, I really appreciate that you gave me a fair review, and if you don't want to continue that story, then I understand.
But I feel like your concern (that he is a latent cuck) is simply a misunderstanding of what is going on behind the scenes, and that you'd probably actually love the story if you understand what's really going on, as well as who he truly becomes later on in the story.
Thank you for the review. There are some points where you came to a wrong conclusion, but overall you made some valid points, thanks.
BTW, the name of the novel is both clickbait and deter people from clicking. (not that it helped me)
The main point when I wrote this novel was precisely to not write likable characters. It was to write a story that will make a reader interested.
You defenitly got me interested, but it would be nice to care at least about one person in the story, the fact that there is none, puts me at limit of droping it.
I don't really know to be happy or not that I made the wrong conclusion from those hints. Yeah certainly interested
In the next arc, I'm already working on it, I will try to flesh out a few characters to make them more likable. I tried to do it in this arc, but I failed miserably.
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