Your welcome! Istas has been quite adorable so far and When I Found Myself seems a bit rushed and telling the timescale is kind of difficult. Would be easily converted to multiple chapters with extrapolation. But, it is your story and you wrote it how you wanted it to be, and it turned out well.
i mean to return to when I found myself some time, but I'm focusing on Istas for now. I've written about a third of the story so far but need to edit all those chapter to publish them but after I hope to fix everything I can on when I found myself.