Hey man I regret saying this but after more considerations I'm gonna have to reject the harpy I'm really sorry.聽
Both had great benefits to the story but the goblin girl outweighs the harpy's. You have no idea but I've been back and forth on this since you mentioned a harpy girl. Like I considered a tentacle monster but not a harpy.
I try. I am enjoying your book so far. I cant say I will get through all of it immediately, but it sucked me in for several hours after my own work shift this morning (when i should have been working on my own story). But I will continue to comment on things that stand out to me, and am looking forward to reading more (Hope to see Alex reunite with Yen {they haven't as of yet when i stopped reading}).
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