Hello it's the author here. I have been working on a short novella if anyone is interested please check out the link below. I would really appreciate if you can support me with this book
Sorry for the slow updates. I am quite preoccupied with a few things this week but I will try to release at least three chapters before the week ends. Hope you all will enjoy them. thanks in advance for all your support. Have a wonderful read
I think that the AI was inside the MC’s soul right?
*Then It is also possible that the MC’s soul was protected, extracted and safely hidden away within the system while [his/now her] body was being disintegrated by the celestial’s and will stay hidden until a new suitable body is formed or is born.
*It is also possible that the AI slowly and secretly evolved it’s master’s soul while it was hidden within the system, I mean think about it an infinity evolving AI but the master’s soul is finite it’s not logical.
So it is probably trying evolve it’s master’s to match that infinity with all the knowledge it gained after gaining access to the whole system and even correcting the things that are wrong so it’s is possible that the MC’s soul is slowly growing more & more towards infinity evolving soul or something.
Who knows by the time this all ends and the MC’s soul truly does become ever evolving [he/now she] might just be as powerful or even more as all celestial’s / Lucifer and her 7 sin / the king of hell or something (that would be super fun to read). Which would make her some sort of GOD or someone with as much power to make others think of [him/her] as a GOD.
I have released the new volume you will just have to wait a little for it reach you but I am sure by the end of the day you will have it. Hope you will enjoy this volume to and yes there are new characters
So, I'm enjoying the history itself, but I think you need take care in some points of your writing.
- The most important, don't write an wall of pure text, try that, while writing stop your breath, when you can't do more, then break the text near this part... lol
- Multiple POV are cool, but take care with they don't became more common than the time of the protagonist
- Try descible more the moment, you don't describle the things around the current moment, in the school test for example, I really didn't know if the protagonist it was present or not until his battle starts.
- Try don't do time skips near relevants moments, an example it was the time of the roality test, that strange thing happened and the next chapter the protagonist it was walking for anywhere. Timeskips tends to be better after a slice of life moment.