…Not saying improvement isn’t a good thing but you should probably have just changed it when you had time. I also see that someone replied to me but I can’t see it anymore since the entire book is deleted. But we’ll, you do you.
I keep on getting bad reviews on RoyalRoad about dialogue for some reason. Some guys who can’t even type keep on bringing up that they are so confused because I don’t namedrop every dialogue spoken, but is it really that bad?
Which part? There’s only two people in the room in the first four chapters. And it even goes back and forth with no change. Adam says one thing, Gaia says something back. Repeat.