thank you for the follow! have another in return! 
Hello, I just want to criticize a little about Isskai Hotel.
I think it's better for the story to focus on the MC developing himself such as a hotel, power or building a Harem, I feel the MC is a fool even though he is an adult where he always helping people for just a little reward and also being very kind and naive because he always wants to be told by other people
Thanks for your criticism. I intend to start focusing on creating a harem for him and evolving his strength now (in the chapters I'm writing to post on patreon).
Out of all the things you could do why did you pick a goblin girl for nahida? Please pick up Likes novel again.
Wait, the harem with anime girl will happen soon
What do you think of a fanfic that focuses only on sex 100% of the time?
Terrible. Sex without buildup is just porn. I don't have to read porn. I can watch it everywhere.
Para noi ser repetitivo el cruco es hacer que importe, que de sienta que el MC hizo algo para tener esa Waifu y no solo por ser MC "Pufff" todas quieren con el
I am ok with it, netori is fine for me too, just not netorare
I think is good idea to spend time and relax
HTS what was he talking about?
"Hentai Transmigration System" Its one of my fanfics, you can find it in webnovel. But I'll probably not continue it (Maybe I will, idk)
Isekai Hotel is missing
• a main character who is calm
• a main character who is attractive
• a main character who doesn't recognize our fictional worlds (since they are also fiction)
• a main character who is ambitious enough to create an isolated world with various hightech homes & mazelike waterways that connect the living spaces
• a dungeon for testing their mettle against people who have stayed at the hotel before (clone)
• a business area for cross-world trading
Thanks for the tips but I'm still on chapter 15 lmao
Well, it's at the beginning of the story. I will not rewrite and will continue writing as is and will develop over time.
I'm sorta disappointed HTS was deleted. I like your writing style. I like the concept of multiversal summons but i'm not sure on that story. I'm sorta jaded on danmachi fanfics, well that and dxd. I understand that's what sells. Any ways. I hope you have good day.
I'm sorry about that. I haven't published a chapter for a long time and I just didn't feel like writing it anymore. However, I am currently writing a new fanfic and will start publishing it soon.
And my new fanfic has a completely original world and won't just be about danmachi or dxd :)
I will be sure to post daily from now on.
Well, what happened? My PC died, I fixed it, but I got covid and got very bad.
After that, my immunity lowered, and I got a severe infection in my left eye. I went to the doctor last week and will probably lose most of the vision in my left eye.
Now I am taking medicine, and I am doing much better! I thank those who have continued to wait patiently for my return.
what a luck you have right? but thank you for realising more chapters, i like the series because it doesn't have ntr and have harem and a little of mind control so thank you
Bon rétablissement 🙏
Take as long as you need for rest. You can't give good chapters if your not feeling well.
what a bad luck, I hope you recover soon, you are a great writer and surely a great person
My suggestion would be that you finally decide who Ais is going to stay with, because the tug of war is a bit annoying when the main character approaches her and then passes it to Bell, if she is going to stay with the main character who Don't try to get her closer to Bell anymore and if you're going to stay with Bell, don't let the protagonist get closer to you. For me, staying with the main character for something is fanfic, screw him and stay alone with Bell.
The trip to the dungeon was not supposed to be to try to get closer to mikoto, so I don't understand why he brought lili. And well, the other thing I hope is that you don't do like in another danmachi fanfic where he can use the system to improve others and it is only limited to the MC, so that others also improve by having sex with him and suddenly everyone starts to be op and he would no longer be just the protagonist.
It was supposed to be something to approach Mikoto, but the others got in the way ( lol ). Don't worry; the System only works for the MC and won't make the other characters stronger. I also think it's stupid to do that since all the characters would get OP, breaking the world's power level.
I suggest you change your Fandom list to have each series tagged separately
I'll edit it later! Thank you!
No author please do not do as in many other novels where they waste time and spend chapters on training others or adding that the system can be used to strengthen others. I'm telling you this because I saw in the last chapter intentions of going into that by trying to train Lili and use things from the system. I beg you please, it is better to continue with the improvement route alone.
Don't worry about it; I will only give her a sword, and she will evolve independently. I won't focus on that :) The protagonist will continue to evolve alone!
Author finally a question to see if you can answer me. Is he finally going to add Ais to the harem in the future or not. Well, I see the thing strange.
I haven't decided on it yet, sorry :( But I will probably add her to the protagonist harem!
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