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[Liana POV]
Clachik!
Looking at the Giant Mech in front of me trying to find me
While I aim my gun rights in front of me where the Giant Mech is, I steadied myself while controlling my breathing...
I picked apart that might have low armor and can be penetrated by the shot...
Still quite hard to find since its whole body is packed with condensed armor...
[Lia aim for the legs!](Elizabeth)
I follow Eli's words and aim for the leg...
My main target is the joint of the leg...
I pick its right leg joint with my gun...
Buzz!...BUZZ!
Electricity started coming out of my gun...
It slowly lights up and...
"Change bullet type Reload... Lightning Bullet..."(Liana)
Buzz!BUZZ!BUZZ!
Energy started gathering on the barrel of my gun and then...
"Fire!"(Liana)
POOOOOOOOOWWWWW!
A long and straight line was shoot from my gun and hit straight on the joint...
I was only knockback 2 feet backward...
Well, that's some improvement from the knockback...
I look in front and saw smokes coming out of its joint...
The Giant Mech falls in a kneeling position because of the shot...
Suddenly my stealth skill turns off...
Revealing myself in the open...
Ah...
Echo didn't lie about that skill turning off when I attack...
I started to sweat...
{I.... FOUND YOU!}(O)
The Giant Mech then swung its sword towards me without even looking back As it started getting up from the ground!...
"Uwa!"(Liana)
SWING!BOOOOOSSSSHHHH!
PASSHH!CRASSHHHH!
I duck and evade the sword...
The giant sword swung right past my head almost touching my ears...
The sword made a big ) shape slash on the ground behind me...
As the sword swung towards the sky, it accidentally hit a skyscraper to my left...
The Giant Mech started to forcefully pull out the sword from the skyscraper...
Crack!CRACK!CRACK!....
Tiiiiiinnngggg!
The skyscraper is about to fall down...
I looked at the Giant Mech and saw its head start to glow...
Tiiiiinnnnggg....
"Not again!?"(Liana)
I then started running to my right...
TING! POOWWWWWW!! TIIIIIIIINNNNNGGGGGGGGGGG!
The laser shot right at me and made a big explosion behind me...
I can feel the shock wave hitting my back as I keep running...
The Giant Mech then started moving its head and the Lazer following it...
As it turns its head the Lazer keeps moving towards me!?...
I look upfront...
"[Dash!]"(Liana)
I dash my way to the front but the Lazer is faster!...
I then try another way by zig-zagging my way...
I evade the Lazer multiple times but it's still not stopping...
I look at the Giant Mech...
I saw the flak guns moving towards me...
"Oh Come On!"(Liana)
BOOM!BOOM!BOOM!BOOM!BOOM!BOOM!BOOM!BOOM!BOOM!BOOM!
I then keep zig-zagging my way with the help of my evasion skill...
[Lia aims at its Flaks!](Elizabeth)
I agree with Eli and charge my gun again...
Buzz!BUZZ!BUZZ!
I aim my gun at one of its Flaks while still running around and evading the Lazer and bullets...
"Reload bullet type lightning Bullet..."(Liana)
CLICK!BUZZ!BUZZ!
My gun started lighting up...
"Fire!"(Liana)
POWWWWWWW!
BOOOOOOOMMMM!
TIIIIIIIIIIIIINNNNGGGG!
The bullet hit one of the flaks in the Giant Mech's body and the Giant Mech's body moved back a couple of steps and the Lazer shoot right up towards the sky...
The giant Mech then moved its right hand up to the sky with its sword in hand and it started glowing and ready to swing towards me until...
I saw the skyscraper beside it falls towards the Giant Mech...
CRACK!CRACK!CRACK!BROKE!
BAAAANNNNGGG!CRASH!CRASH!
TIIINNGG!
WUSH!POOOOWWWWW!
The Giant Mech stumbled down in a crouching position as the Skyscraper landed on its back as it was about to swing its sword...
The sword slashes straight towards the ground on my left and made a giant explosion...
With that, I run away from the Giant Mech to keep my distance but then...
{You're not GETTING ANYWHERE!!}(O)
I heard O shouting at me inside the Giant Mech...
The Giant Mech then started getting up with the Skyscraper behind its back...
No way...
CRACK!CRACK!CRACK!
The skyscraper was ready to break into pieces...
And my body started becoming quite heavy...
[Lia gravity Field detected! Move back!](Elizabeth)
Wait seriously!? I quickly move back from the Giant Mech...
The Giant Mech then turned its body around smashing its left hand on the skyscraper behind it...
The skyscraper then started breaking down into millions of peaches and smokes was formed from the dust...
BOOOM!BOOOM!
I can see the Giant Mech body rotating around...
And then the Giant Mech forcefully broke the skyscraper into pieces and swing it at...
ME!?...
Millions of small and big chunks of the skyscraper fly towards me...
I started to run away from the Giant Mech...
Pieces of concrete and Mental fell around me making Giant clouds of dust all around...
I close my eyes so that dust wouldn't get into my eyes...
I crouched down to avoid every falling bit of concrete and metal...
After that, I started getting up after I looked around to see that no more pieces of the Skyscraper were falling towards me...
I look behind me and...
TIIINNGGG!BUSSSSHHH!
Saw the Giant Mech right in front of me started to swing its leg down onto my head!...
"[Jet!]"(Liana)
Wusssshh!POWWW!
I propelled myself low on the ground behind me evading the leg that just touched the ground where I'm at...
BOOOOM!
CRASH!....
"Ouch...."(Liana)
I crash into the hard ground while evading that...
I quickly got up and saw the Giant Mech looking at me...
{Pssh!*.... Nice Job evading that kid... You always amazed me}(O)
"Thanks for the compliment...."(Liana)
As I stare at it I look around the place and saw I was right behind the last skyscraper...
I quickly look in front and saw the Giant Mech started putting its sword on the ground...
DING!
I heard a ding sound as a screen popped into my vision...
[Evolution Available! Are you ready to evolve?]
"What?"(Liana)
[Ah, I think you can evolve now Lia... Just say Yes and it will start](Elizabeth)
I nod and was about to say it until...
TIIIINNGGG!
BOOOMM!DRAGGGGGGG!
The Giant Mech started dragging its sword towards me!?...
I look behind and there is the skyscraper...
I look in front of me and the sword is coming closer and closer by the second!...
"[Jet!]"(Liana
WOOSH!POWWWW!
BOOOOM!
I jump up high...
And the sword smashes Below me...
I look Below me and the sword keeps going up towards me!?...
BOOOM!BOOM!...DRAAAAAGGGGGGGG!
"[Jet!]"(Liana)
WOSH!POOOOOWWWW!
I then quickly propelled myself beside the skyscraper wall as the sword keeps following me...
{Just Die All READY!}(O)
[Lia evolve now!](Elizabeth)
I bit my lower lips and close my eyes, slowly open them to look at the screen...
[Evolution Available! Are you ready to evolve?]
"YES!"(Liana)
Ping!
[Confirm Evolution start!]
"Ugh!"(Liana)
It hurts...
My body is burning up...
Mainly my right eye....
Cling!cling!
I saw glowing red particles of light forming all around me...
The sword keeps coming closer and closer by the second...
I can't move my body!...
I can only look at the moving sword...
I didn't even know my right eye started glowing red brightly...
My body started to light up as the sword about to hit me...
Then everything turns white...
[Evolution complete!]
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Ping!
[Registering...]
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Ping!
[Evolution into the C.H.A.O.S Series]
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Ping!buzz!buzz!
[Evolve into the legendary walking catastrophe "CHAOS Wolf" ]
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what's the alignment? chaotic good, neutral, or evil?
Find out next chapter
Thanks for the chapter!~
I aim my gun rights in front of me where the Giant Mech was I steady my self while controlling my breathing...
While I aimed my guns right in front of me where the Giant Mech is, I steadied myself while controlling my breathing...
can be penetrated by the shoot...
can be penetrated by the shot...
I was knock back only 2 feet behind...
I was only knocked back only 2 feet backwards...
because of the shoot...
because of the shot...
The Giant Mech then swing
The Giant Mech then swung
The giant sword swing right
The giant sword swung right
As the sword swing towards the sky and then accidentally hit a skyscraper on my left...
As the sword swung towards the sky, it accidentally hit a skyscraper to my left...
The Giant Mech started forcefully pull out the sword from the skyscraper...
The Giant Mech started to forcefully pull out the sword from the skyscraper...
I look at the Giant robot
I looked at the Giant robot.
The laser shoot right
The laser shot right
the Giant Mech body move back a couple of steps away and the Lazer shoot up right towards the sky before stopping...
the Giant Mech's body moved back a couple of steps and the laser shot right up towards the sky
The giant Mech then move it's
The Giant Mech then moved it's
The sword slash straight to
The sword slashed straight towards
And my body started beco quite heavy...
And my body started becoming quite heavy...
The skyscraper was about to broke in to peaces...
The skyscraper was ready to break into pieces
The Giant Mech then turn it's body
The Giant Mech then turned it's body
into millions of peaches and smokes of dust was form...
into millions of pieces and smoke was formed from the dust
And then the Giant Mech forcefully break the skyscraper down in to peaces and swing it at...
And then the Giant Mech forcefully broke the skyscraper into pieces and swung it at...
Peaches of concretes and Mental falling all around me making Giant Dust all around the place...
Pieces of concrete and metal fell around me making giant clouds of dust all around...
I close my eyes so that dust won't get in to my eyes...
I crouched down to avoid every falling Concretes and metal...
I closed my eyes so that dust wouldn't get into my eyes...
I crouched down to avoid the falling bits of concrete and metal...
After that I started getting up after I look around to see that no more peaces of the Skyscraper falli towards me...
After that, I started getting up after I looked around to see that no more pieces of the skyscraper were falling towards me...
The Giant Mech right in front of me swinging it's leg on top of my head!...
The Giant Mech right in front of me started to swing it's leg down onto my head!...
I head a ding sound and a screen pop out on my screen...
I heard a ding sound as a screen popped into my vision...
I bite my lower lips and close my eyes and slowly open it and look at the screen...
I bit my lower lip and closed my eyes, slowly opening them to look at the screen...
Well... At least It's not like last time...
@DanNepZen Everyone struggles or makes mistakes, especially when it is an entirely different language that is not their first/main language. While I do not know your original language, there is always a difference in structure and grammar that does not always translate over. So don't feel down about making mistakes with the English language.