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[Third Person POV]
BOOOOOMMMM!!!.....
"smirk* finally..."(O)
O looked at the screen in front of him...
Clouds of smokes were flying everywhere on the screen where he hit Liana...
"Well, my job is done! Time to get ou-"(O)
PHIP!PHIP!PHIP!PHIP!PHIP!
"Huh?"(O)
Suddenly an alarm came off from the cockpit...
Then the screen in front of him turned bright...
PLING!................
SSSSSSLLLLLLAAAAASSSSSHHHHH!
PIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNN!......
A loud and sharp light came flashing...
O didn't move an inch...
He only heard ringing as the cockpit on his right side was covered in bright light...
As the light faded away he slowly looked at what happened...
He saw 3 slices on his cockpit on his right that extended from the right side of the wall till the end of the cockpit, through these slices he could see the outside of the mech...
One of the slashes had hit his face and made a giant slice on his mask...
The slice of the cockpit almost looks like a slash from a claw...
Pachusss........
Blood splattered from the wound on his face...
The wind started coming in from the open wall of the cockpit...
Wussshhhhh......
Pachus!pachus!....
All of the Droids on O's right side got destroyed by that slash...
The only ones left are the Droids on his left...
"Wha-"(O)
It's a miracle his head didn't get cut off...
He slowly turned around...
Buzz!buzz!
He saw red electricity buzzing along with the entire slice of his cockpit...
His Giant Mech just got sliced open from its right shoulder down to the chest...
He kept looking at the slash until a screen popped up in his view...
What he saw on that screen was...
Liana...
With her right hand covered with red electricity and...
A red, long, glowing claw formed on her right hand...
Her head slowly turned to the right with a surprised face from her red and blue eyes as she looked at the claw and him...
Buzz!buzz!....
Crack!...
O hand was shaking while gripping hard on the control panel as he stared at the screen...
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[Liana POV]
Looking back at what had happened...
I was already behind the Giant Mech...
I don't know what had happened but I remembered gripping my right hand into a fist and that something started forming...
I looked at my right hand...
And I saw 3 blades of lights...
No, claws might be the best way to describe it...
There are also two other blades like spikes below the claws on the left and right side looking like small blades of light...
The claw was covered with red electricity and was glowing brightly in my hand...
It Also had hook-like curves at the end of the claw with a red aura leaking at the end...
Seriously what is this?...
It looks cool...
[... Out of all the races you can evolve into, it has to be that race... It's going to be problematic in the future...](Elizabeth)
Eli looked at me with a scared expression...
What's going on?...
"Um... Are you okay Eli?"(Liana)
[I-i should be asking you that... Are you okay Lia?](Elizabeth)
I started moving my hands and legs and then nod at Eli...
"Yeap I'm doing fine... But what just happened?"(Liana)
[Cough*..... um... well... Ah...](Elizabeth)
Eli did a fake cough but then stopped to think about what to say...
I look back and saw the Giant Mech...
"Woah..."(Liana)
What I saw was a claw mark on the right side of its shoulder towards its chest...
"Um...did I do that?"(Liana)
[Yes... Yes you did...](Elizabeth)
I didn't know what happened and what's going on at all right now...
I was surprised to see how I did that...
I only remember just swinging my right arm at it...
Buzz!buzz!...
Wusshh....
The wind started blowing from behind me as I turned and looked at the Giant Mech with the giant claw mark on it...
I saw the Giant Mech head slowly turning and looking at me...
{Psssh*... you'll pay for that....}(O)
The Giant Mech then started running towards me and swung its left hand at me...
If it is like that then there's no other option...
BUZZ!BUZZ!...
"[Dash!]"(Liana)
BUSSSSH!
"Woah!"(Liana)
My body feels...
Light?...
It's way lighter than before...
I dash towards the Giant Mech as it swung its Left hand down at me...
I prepare myself...
And...
I took a crouching position before the hand hit the ground and I jump onto its hand...
BOOOOOOM!
Wuusshh....
Then I started Slashing its hand with my claw...
And I quickly ran up its hand while still swinging and slashing my claws all the way up its arm...
SLASH!SLASH!SLASH!SLASH!
TIIINNNGG!
SLASH!SLASH!SLASH!SLASH!
I was halfway up its arm until I saw its remaining Flaks aiming at me...
BOOM!BOOM!BOOM!BOOM!BOOM!
While evading some bullets, I kept Slashing its arm, and some bullets flying my way...
Click!
BUZZ!BUZZ!
BOOOOM!
I did a force smash with my left hand and jumped up a couple of meters away from its hand, leaving a small crater behind on its hand...
The Flaks keep shooting at me...
BOOM!PLING!BOOM!PANG!BOOM!PAN!BOOM!
With my right arm busy slashing bullets, I stretched my left arm with the gun at the Flaks...
I did a front flip midair while still aiming...
The barrel of my gun light up...
BUZZ!BUZZ!BUZZ!
I haven't said the phrase yet but for some reason, I have a feeling that I don't need to say it each time...
Suddenly the light in my gun turned blue...
And somehow time was a bit slower...
Pling!pling!pling!....
BUZZ!BUZZ!....
I saw something...
A trail of blue small light...
Coming from somewhere...
Ping!
[Resonance detected!]
Suddenly a screen popped out in my vision...
Before I was about to say something...
[Lia!](Elizabeth)
I snap out and look in front of me and saw a giant Sword swinging at me!?....
I twist my body around as the sword swung right past me...
Still, mid-air I look at the Giant Mech to see its giant Head right in front of me about to shoot its Lazer!?....
Woooooonnnnggg....
"Tch!"(Liana)
CLICK!
I aim my gun right at the head...
Then pull the trigger as the Lazer fired at me...
POOOWWWWWW!
POOOWWWWWW!
We both fired our weapons together...
I can feel the air heating up around the place as I shoot...
Then I saw a flash of light when my shot hit the Lazer...
TING!WUUUUSSSSHHHHHHH!!!...........
The two energy hit each other and then energy started accumulating and...
BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMMM!
My field of Vision turns bright...
I can feel a shock wave of energy hitting me...
And I was sent flying from there...
"Ugh!.... [Jet!]"(Liana)
I quickly use my skill to shoot myself up in the air before getting thrown away from there...
What I saw right in front of me are clouds of smoke and small bright light falling and hitting everything all around me...
Boom!Boom!Boom!Boom!Boom!
All the lights fall and explode as they hit the ground...
[Lia you okay!?](Elizabeth)
I saw Elizabeth worried face on the screen...
"Y-yeah I think I'm okay"(Liana)
I can still see clouds of smoke in front of me...
Then I can see something slowly moving out from the smoke...
TIIIIINNNNGGG!
The Giant Mech slowly came out from the smoke with its head looking at me...
I was still up in the sky slowly falling towards the ground...
Suddenly the Giant Mech raises its right hand with the sword to the sky...
And then stabbed the sword into the ground in front of it making a crack on the ground...
Then every light on the Giant Mech suddenly changed color...
The color change from red to purple...
{Hahaha.....HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!}(O)
I can hear O's voice from here...
He is laughing loudly...
{I'm done thinking...... I Just need you to die......yeah... Just need you to die....}(O)
Then I can feel something coming...
GRUMBLE! GRUMBLE! GRUMBLE!
Everything below me started shaking...
Then...
POOOWWW!PACHIIIINNNGG!PAAAANNNNGGGG!
Buildings, roads, everything started levitating up to the sky...
"Um..."(Liana)
[He activated 0-Gravity.....](Elizabeth)
And then everything started flying towards me...
Ooooh...
This ain't good...
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i feel like O should have died last chapter but here we are, keeping his ego intact
(the chapter is good despite that)
i think found some mistakes:
He activate 0-Gravity
activate
Do you mean: activated
I can heard O voice from here..
heard
Do you mean: hear
@iamchangingthissoon thanks for the correction
@DanNepZen
Thanks for the chapter!~
Talk about one cheat of an evolution
Clouds of smokes was flying everywhere on the screen where he hit Liana...
Clouds of smoke were flying everywhere on the screen where he hit Liana...
he slowly look at what happen...
he slowly looked at what happened...
He saw 3 slices on his cockpit on the right from the side of the wall till the end of the cockpit he can see the outside from the slash...
He saw 3 slices on his cockpit to his right that extended from the right side of the wall till the end of the cockpit, through these slices he could see outside of the mech...
One of the slash hit his face and made a giant slice on his mask...
One of the slashes had hit his face and made a giant slice on his mask...
Blood splatter from the wound
Blood splattered from the wound
The only one left is the Droids on his left...
The only ones left are the Droids on his left...
He slowly turn around...
He slowly turned around...
He saw red electricity buzzing from the start till the end of the open slice of his cockpit...
His Giant Mech just got slice open from it's right shoulder towards the chest...
He keeps looking at the slash until a screen popped up in his view...
He saw red electricity buzzing along the entire slice of his cockpit...
His Giant Mech just got sliced open from it's right shoulder down to the chest...
He kept looking at the slash until a screen popped up in his view...
A red long glowing claw forming on her right hand...
A red, long, glowing claw formed on her right hand...
Her head slowly turn to the right
Her head slowly turned to the right
Looking at what happen...
Looking back at what had happened... {This seems to make the most sense and fits with the sentences that follow it}
I don't know what happen but I remember gripping my right hand into a fist and something started forming...
I don't know what had happened but I remembered gripping my right hand into a fist and that something started forming...
I look at my right hand...
I looked at my right hand...
No claws might be the best way to describe it...
No, claws might be the best way to describe it...
There's also 2 other blades like spikes
There are also two other blade like spikes
and was glowing brightly in my hand it Also has a hook like curves at the end of the claw with red aura leaking at the end...
and was glowing brightly in my hand.
It also had hook like curves at the end of the claw with red aura leaking at the end...
[... Out of all the races you can evolve it have to be that race...
[... Out of all the races you could have evolved into, it had to be that race...
Eli look at me
Eli looked at me
Eli did a fake cough but then stop to think about what to say...
I look back and saw the Giant Mech...
Eli did a fake cough but then stopped to think about what to say...
I didn't know what happen and what's going on at all right now...
I was surprised to see how I did that...
I remember just swinging my right arm at it...
I didn't know what happened nor what's going on at all right now...
I was surprised to see how I did that...
I only remember just swinging my right arm at it...
Wind started blowing form behind me as I turn and look at the Giant Mech with the giant claw mark on it...
Wind started blowing from behind me as I turned and looked at the Giant Mech with the giant claw mark on it...
and swing it's left hand at me...
and swung its left hand at me...
If it's like that the there's no other option...
If it is like that then there is no other option...
as it swing it's Left hand down at me...
as it swung its left hand down at me...
The I started slash it's hand with my claw...
Then I started slashing its hand with my claw...
And I fastly run up its hand while still slashing my claw all the way up it's arm...
And I quickly ran up its hand while still swinging and slashing my claws all the way up its arm...
[quote]I was haft way true it's arm until[/quote]
I was halfway up its arm until
[quote]I evaded some bullets as I keep Slashing it's arm and some bullets flying my way...[/quote]
While evading some bullets, I kept slashing its arm along with some of the bullets flying my way...
[quote]I did a force smash with my left hand and jump up a couple of meters away from it's hand making a small crater in its hand...
The Flaks keeps shooting at me...[/quote]
I did a force smash with my left hand and jumped up a couple of meters away from its hand, leaving a small crater behind on its hand...
The Flaks kept shooting at me...
[quote]With my right arm busy slashing bullets I stretched my left arm with the gun at the Flaks...[/quote]
With my right arm busy slashing bullets, I stretched my left arm with the gun at the Flaks...
[quote]I haven't said the praise yet but for some reason I have a feeling that I don't need to say it all the time...[/quote]
I haven't said the phrase yet but for some reason I have a feeling that I don't need to say it each time...
[quote]light in my gun turn blue...[/quote]
light in my gun turned blue...
[quote]as the sword swung right past below me...[/quote]
as the sword swung right past me...
[quote] getting toss away from there...[/quote]
getting thrown away from there...
[quote]What I saw right in front of me are clouds of smokes and bright small light falling and hitting everything all around below me...[/quote]
What I saw right in front of me are clouds of smoke and small bright lights falling and hitting everything all around me...
[quote]All the lights falls and explode as it hit the ground...[/quote]
All the lights fell and explode when they hit the ground...
[quote] came out from the smokes [/quote]
came out from the smoke
[quote]And then stab the sword on to the ground[/quote]
And then stabbed the sword into the ground
[quote]suddenly change color...[/quote]
suddenly changed color...
[quote]I can heard O voice from here...[/quote]
I can hear O's voice from here...
[quote][He activate 0-Gravity.....](Liana)[/quote]
[He activated 0-Gravity.....](Elizabeth) {Elizabeth talks in [ ] and Liana talks in " "}
I am always amazed on how you give such detail in correcting my mistakes I will always respect your help