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[Liana POV]
"[Jet!]"(Liana)
POW!
Catapulting myself in the air, I quickly maneuvered around the place while avoiding everything that is coming my way...
"Woah!"(Liana)
I saw a building flying towards me!?...
I did a roll in the air and quickly landed myself on top of the roof of the building before propelling myself up to the sky again...
I look around me...
Everything is floating, including myself...
[Well, this is not too bad I guess?](Elizabeth)
Eli kinda has a point I guess? It is somehow easier to maneuver with Jet when there is no gravity and I did also become stronger since I evolved...
My body is very light and sturdy so it's pretty great...
PLANGG!PLING!
I heard a sound beside me...
I turned my head and saw a chunk of rubble flying towards me...
I swing my glowing Claw at it...
SWING!
PACHUS!PACHUS!PACHUS!
The rubble was sliced into 3 pieces as it floated past and away from me...
I look at where the Giant Mech is...
It was still there with its sword in the ground looking at me...
It stretched its left hand that still had the marks I left...
It still can move its left arm even when I kept on slashing it?...
Seriously what a sturdy Mech...
It stretched its palm wide open at me and...
Grumble! Grumble!...
I can see a big shadow on top of me...
I look up and saw a building Falling!...
"[Jet!]"(Liana)
I propelled myself forward as the building falls behind me to the hard ground below me...
BOOOOOOOMM!........
The results I saw were a Giant Cloud of smoke coming up towards the sky...
I then looked at the Giant Mech...
And I aimed my gun at it...
PACHUS!PACHUS!....
Buzz!buzz!
CRACK!
"Hm?"(Liana)
I look at my gun and...
Saw a crack on the barrel all the way to the back of my gun...
"Oh now that's just great..."(Liana)
There's no way I can shoot at it with my gun like this...
I don't wanna risk exploding my gun...
Cling!cling!...
I still hear that ringing sound...
Where is it coming from?...
[Lia why not try Reso- Lia!](Elizabeth)
Before Eli finished what she was about to say I saw a giant chunk of a road flying towards me!?...
BOOM!
I was smashed into the road and was now having a difficult time getting up because of the sudden crash and the weight from it...
[Lia Behind!](Elizabeth)
I look behind me and saw another chunk of the road flying towards me...
Ah! It's trying to crush me!?...
I quickly got up even though it was hard to do as the chunk of the road kept getting closer and closer...
"[Dash!]"(Liana)
I quickly ran towards the end of the road and jumped as the roads crashed into each other and turn into piles of debris upon impact...
I crossed my hand in front of me to shield my face from the incoming debris...
After that, I looked at the Giant Mech and saw its remaining Flaks aiming at me...
BOOM!BOOM!BOOM!BOOM!BOOM!
"[Jet!]"(Liana)
I propelled myself to a nearby building as the incoming bullets flew towards me...
BOOM!BOOM!BOOM!BOOM!BOOM!
I used the building as a shield as bullets came flying towards the building I was at...
I take a little breather as I think of a way to get closer to it...
[Lia! Try using resonance with the broken gun you have and the hairpin](Elizabeth)
"Resonance?"(Liana)
I look at my broken gun in my left hand...
"Hm... Oke now where is it..."(Liana)
The glowing claw on my right-hand fades away as I quickly open my inventory and look for the hairpin...
"Ah found it!"(Liana)
I took it out and saw that the blue gem was glowing brightly...
Cling!cling!cling!...
"So that's why I heard clinging noises"(Liana)
I look at the gem on the hairpin and my gun...
"so what am I supposed to do to use resonance, Eli?"(Liana)
[Oh, you just need to put them close to each other and use your magic on it... It is quite hard as you can only use the element that you always use and you also have to use your imagination to transform the weapon into a new one provide you have the materials to make it...](Elizabeth)
"So... It's like making a new weapon or upgrading it?"(Liana)
[It is a bit of both, but I wonder what kind of gun can even use the Lightning element as power? I don't know anything about that... I only know of swords that can use Lightning element...](Elizabeth)
Elizabeth looks dejected as she can't find a good answer for me...
But I made the biggest smile I can do...
"Hehehe...."(Liana)
[Lia? Why do you look so happy?](Elizabeth)
"I'm happy because I know one gun that uses electricity as power in FPS games that I love to use!..."(Liana)
[Hm?](Elizabeth)
Seems like Elizabeth didn't know what I am talking about...
Well, time to do it!...
I slowly about to put the two together until...
[Um...Lia Behind You!](Elizabeth)
I look behind me and saw the building turning bright orange...
Color drained from my body...
"[Je-"(Liana)
POOOOWWWWWW!
BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMM!
The building exploded right in front of me, knocking me back while spewing molten metal and concrete all around the place...
I saw a Lazer piercing everything on its way right in front of me...
I manage to evade it because of the Blast from the building...
Then I saw a small rock flying towards me...
Smack! PLING!
"AH!"(Liana)
It knocks the hairpin out of my hand...
I can see the hairpin flying away from me...
"[Jet!]"(Liana)
I quickly dashed my way through the various bits of the rubble of the buildings as I try to grab the hairpin back...
BOOM!BOOM!BOOM!BOOM!BOOM!
"Ugh!"(Liana)
I can see bullets flying towards me...
And I have to evade left and right so that I won't get hit...
BOOM!BOOM!BOOM!BOOM!BOOM!
I can't regain control of the direction I am headed in...
If this keeps up I will crash into something...
I saw a giant sign of a building floating nearby...
I propelled myself there...
Step!
I manage to put my feet on the sign and look around...
Cling!cling!cling!cling!
I saw the hairpin shining...
It was way up in the sky...
I narrow my eyes to lock on it so that I won't miss it...
"[Dash!]"(Liana)
I quickly dash my way to the end of the sign and jump...
I saw a lot of rubble and debris all around me, which I use as a stepping stone to jump towards where the hairpin is...
BOOM!BOOM!BOOM!BOOM!BOOM!
TIIIINNNGGGG!
Wooooooonnnnngg......
Ah! It's about to fire it's Lazer again...
I was very high up in the sky...
I can see I'm getting closer and closer to the sea of clouds in the sky...
"Come on... A couple of steps more..."(Liana)
I keep jumping from debris to debris...
The hairpin was a couple of meters away from me...
I stretched my right hand up...
"Ugh!....come on..."(Liana)
CLING!CLING!CLING!....
WOOOOOOOONNNGGGGGG!!!....
Just a little more...
Grab!
"Got It!"(Liana)
POOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWW!
The gem on the hairpin Glows brightly in my hand as I look to see the Lazer coming straight at me...
My vision became bright and I close my eyes...
As the Lazer hit me, it opens up a giant circle in the sea of clouds revealing a giant moon along with numerous stars in the sky that were only visible through that circle...
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Thanks the chapter!~
Catapulting my self on the air I quickly maneuver around the place avoiding everything that's coming my way...
Catapulting myself in the air, I quickly maneuvered around the place while avoiding everything that is coming my way...
I did a roll in the air and landed my self on top of the roof of the building before propelling my self up again in the sky...
I did a roll in the air and quickly landed myself on top of the roof of the building before propelling myself up to the sky again...
Everything is floating even me...
Everything is floating, including myself...
[Well this is not to bad I guess?](Elizabeth)
to => too
Well Eli kinda have a point? It is somehow easy to maneuver with [Jet] when there's no gravity and I did become more stronger since I evolve...
Well Eli kinda had a point? It is somehow easier to maneuver with [Jet] when there is no gravity and I did also become stronger since I evolved...
saw a chunk of rubbles flying
rubbles => rubble
The rubble was slice in to 3 pieces as it then float away from me...
The rubble was sliced into 3 pieces as it floated past and away from me...
it's sword on the ground
on => in
that still have the marks I left...
have => had
when I keep on slashing it?...
keep => kept
I propelled my self forward as the building falls behind me to the hard ground below me...
my self => myself
The lasting I saw was a Giant Clouds of smokes coming up towards the sky...
The result I saw was a Giant Cloud of smoke coming up towards the sky...
And I aim my gun at it...
aim => aimed
I was smash in to the road and now having a difficult time getting up because of the sudden crash and weight from it...
I was smashed into the road and was now having a difficult time getting up because of the sudden crash and the weight from it...
Ah! It's trying to crushed me!?...
crushed => crush
I quickly got up vertically even know it was hard as the chunk of road kept getting closer and closer...
I quickly got up even though it was hard to do as the chunk of road kept getting closer and closer...
I quickly run up towards the end of the road and jumped as it crash in to each other and turns into piles of debris behind me...
I quickly ran towards the end of road and jumped as the roads crashed into each other and turned into piles of debris upon impact...
as the incoming bullets fly towards me...
fly => flew
I use the building as a shield as bullets came hitting the building I was at...
I used the building as a shield as bullets came flying towards the building I was at...
broken gun on my left hand...
on => in
"so what am I supposed to do to resonance Eli?"(Liana)
"so what am I supposed to do to use resonance Eli?"(Liana)
[Oh you need to put them close to each other and use your magic on it... It's quite hard you can only use the element that you always use and also have to use your imagination to fix the weapon in to a new one while also needs to have the materials to make it...](Elizabeth)
[Oh, you just need to put them close to each other and use your magic on it... It is quite hard as you can only use the element that you always use and you also have to use your imagination to transform the weapon into a new one provided you have the materials to make it...](Elizabeth)
"So... It's like making a new weapon or upgrading it?"(Liana)
[Yes, but I wonder what kind of gun use lighting element as power? I don't know anything about that... I only know swords that can use lighting element...](Elizabeth)
"So... is it like making a new weapon or upgrading it?"(Liana)
[It is a bit of both, but I wonder what kind of gun can even use lightning element as power? I don't know anything about that... I only know of swords that can use the lightning element...](Elizabeth)
{along with the edits I did here, it makes more since Liana references using electricity for it and lightning makes more sense than light. One deals with electricity (lightning, don't forget the 'n' behind the 't' in the spelling) and the other deals with visible light (lighting or light)}
The building explode right in front of me knocking me back with it's hot melted metal and concrete all around the place...
The building exploded right in front of me, knocking me back while spewing molten metal and concrete all around the place...
I quickly dash my way true the rubbles of the buildings as I try to grab the hairpin back...
I quickly dashed my way through the various bits of rubble from the building as I try to grab the hairpin back...
I can't regain my step...
I can't regain control of the direction that I am headed in...
{or}
I can't regain forward moment...
[quote]I manage to put my feets on the sign and look around...[/quote]
feets => feet
[quote]so that I won't missed it...[/quote]
missed => miss
[quote]I saw alot of rubbles and debris all around me and I use that as a stepping stone and jumped towards where the hairpin is...[/quote]
I saw a lot of rubble and debris all around me, which I use as a stepping stones to jump towards where the hairpin is...
[quote]As the Lazer hit me and made a giant circle on the sea of clouds revealing a giant moon and the stars in the sky around the circle in the sky...[/quote]
As the Lazer hit me, it opened a giant circle in the sea of clouds revealing a giant moon along with numerous stars in the sky that were only visible through that circle...
{You get a cookie! }
thanks for the cookie now here's a melon!
All i see is jet, dash and Lia behind you!
While liana tries to load a gun
Well she's having problems up in the sky since she can't shoot back haha.....
@DanNepZen When's O going to explode?
@iamchangingthissoon oh his Mech is going to get destroyed with Lia new weapon next chapter
So yeap he's so dead on the next one or two chapters
@DanNepZen