Well, I basically dumped everything I had stored in my Google Drive so you can't ask anything from me XD
I will observe how this goes and either continue it from here or do a rewrite version where more events occur in between the time skips and more detail on the quests he receives.
This is just a trial anyway so I may still change things as it go. It could be considered as a short story for now but obviously this isn't the end of this story :P
I know that I may have had Lucas repeat his sob story every time but...well...that's it. I have nothing to say XD I'm too lazy to think of anything else.
Also sleepy.
It's 4 AM
And I may be a bit drunk while writing this AN.
So.
...
Err, that's it.
XD
Oh yeah.
As far as love interests go, obviously this will be a huge harem. Wonder Woman, Mera, Batgirl, Poison Ivy...not sure with Thea Queen and Lena Luthor yet but could be. For future stuff, maybe Starfire, a lady Green Lantern, Supergirl, and such...I dunno, still in the works XD
We'll see how this first 13 chaps go first...
I may actually write a completely different concept instead. Haha.
With that.
See ya in the future! If ever! XD
Damn, I rushed through the chapters. It's actually really good. Thanks for the chapters and keep the good work.
me too
Keep it up bruh ....this fanfic is good and plz don't close this down mr author ?
Continue it's pretty good
more please
thanks for the story... please continue, no need to rewrite xD
I personally want more of this story. Though him having an actual personal power instead of a system would have been nice but overall, I like it.
Please continue! My friend from hischool taught me everything i know about DC, so seing it like this with the cast interacting with Lucas (Batman's fre*king brother!) is so fun to read.
@Imbreak I actually really like this. it was pretty good, i did see some writing errors but they're over all small things, minor spelling errors really. I hope you decide to continue this. but something I want you to keep in mind is how will you continue, and where will you stop. that will be an imprtant thing, Lucas is probably not dead, but if you continue from where we are right now, what will you focus on. Lucas and his time trapped in Apokolips? how will his synchronization with Darkseid affect him? Will there be an effect upon him caused by making a connection with one of DC's greatest villians? what will he do in this time? how long will he be there? how will he get back? or will you focus on Bruce, Diana, and the other people that he made connections with on Earth? what will they do in this time? what will they be fighting? how has Lucas's supposed death affected them? What will Pamela do in this time? will she act out in rage, and devote herself to the plants she loved, becoming the villian Poison Ivy to try and forget his death? or will she become a anti-hero, and try to protect Gotham in his stead? Those are the things I want you to think about. As well as when will you say tthe story is over. Do your best and I would love to see this story continue. good luck
@Imbreak and if you decide to reboot the story, how will you change it? will you keep the system or will you give the main character actual powers? will you give him all new powers or will you change the system into an actual power with all of it's effects pretty much the same, but more intuitive and instinctual to him rather than a sytem that he can physically see? will you make him a reincarnated person or will you give him the ability to see multiple timelines and various multiverses and the ability to see into them and how they play out but not his own? and how will these "synchronizations" work in thhat case if you change it? will his connection affect him in some way? will it have an effect on his mind? and how will connections to beings like Darkseid affect him? will they slightly corupt him or maybe make him more violent and even slightly evil? sorry for bringing all this up. I really like this story and I really want to see more of this story, and I kinda want to help a little bit. these comments are kinda my way of helping. I hope my thoughts help you out.
@Megamink well, I did plan out a few things but nothing solid yet XD, I'll still have to wait and see first XD
@Imbreak have him get diana's mother too
@Imbreak author instead of martan man-hunters powers get his niece's(from young justice) powers as they are stronger then his and maybe add her to the harem. Also don't forget about Raven get her power and also maybe add her to the harem.