BEST READ WITH THE BLACK ON WHITE TEXT(moon looking button):

Music to listen to.

Opening: Trae Tha Truth ft. Mystikal, Tech N9ne and Brian Angel - All That I Know

Closing: King Los ft. Twista and Tank - We Are Not The Same

FADE IN:

INT. KILL CITY PRISON DAY

We are now back to Kill City Prison with our hero still sitting on the floor talking up to the standing man with the mask.

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I heard a lot about you Ness, a street fighting swordsman turned Elementalist. Defeated all of Kill City's best but even you get tired when it comes to those newly gained powers. However, with a little guidance you could be great.

 

NESS

(Acts like he had a realization)

Oh so we doing this. Ahem...And if I refuse?

 

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Then I would have to make sure that you don't become a threat.

 

NESS

By killing me, Mr...

 

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Slade.

 

NESS

Right right...Now Slade you know how I got the name Ness?

 

SLADE

(Threatening tone)

Speak your mind, but chose your words carefully, they may be your last.

 

NESS

Ness ain't just some game character who can control elements. It's a combo of three words. Toughness, smartness...

 

S LADE

And what about the third?

 

NESS

Finesse...

We now see Ness remove his restraints and a shock Slade.

NESS

(Breaks through the bars and hits Slade with a mean right hook to the face)

And that E at the end is for elite.

CUT TO:

Opening:

bryf963 Presents

Teen Titians: Birth of Ness

Starring

Ness

And the DC owned Teen Titans

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BACK TO:

We are now taking to the Titian's jet on the way to Kill City Prison with the remaining Titans sitting at their station.

Fost Da Writer: now I know some of y'all may probably be mad but again with the Titans I'm not gonna be that descriptive because everybody knows what they look like. Beast boy green skin dude, robin is the nigga with the mask and batman's apprentice. Raven girl in the purple cloak, hair is now a little bit passed her shoulders in this story and Starfire, girl with the red hair that wears the light purple.

STARFIRE

So this Ness is in this Kill City Prison, wouldn't he be considered a bad guy?

 

ROBIN

Normally yes, but with a recommendation from Batman there must be more to him.

 

BEASTBOY

But what if he doesn't even wanna join us? He's a criminal after all dude.

 

ROBIN

We still have to try, with villains getting stronger we need as much help as we can get.

 

BEASTBOY

(Turns his chair around in anger)

You wouldn't be saying that if Cy was still here bro.

 

ROBIN

(Sighs out of depressing)

Beast...

 

PRISON WARDEN

(Radioing on police radio)

Emergency KILL CITY PRISON HAS BEEN ATTACK BY AN UNKNOWN ASSAILANT WITH A MASK. I REPE-

 

ROBIN

(Anger slowly building as he clutches his fist)

Slade...Ok Titans prepare for battle.

Meanwhile Slade and our hero continue battle hand to hand combat with Slade having the upper hand...

NESS

(Gets kicked back in his own cell)

Damn... not bad.

 

SLADE

(Brings and holds Ness up into the air)

Too bad I thought you would have more potential even without your powers being usable and your swords not being here. But as it seems this prison is your kryptonite. The way I see it, you can die or join me.

 

NESS

Hmm, I'll be damned if I die at the hands of a robot.

As Slade's eyes open in shock we are now brought back to the Titans entering Kill City Prison...

BEASTBOY

(Looking at all the dead and unconscious victims before them)

Dude...

 

STARFIRE

(Stricken with sadness)

This is...terrible...

 

ROBIN

No time guys, we have to find Ness now.

 

RAVEN

And stop Slade before he kills anymore people.

 

ROBIN

Raven's right, titans split up!

As the Titans split up and look around their efforts of finding Ness seems fruitless until.

RAVEN

(Thinking to herself)

All the prisoners and cops are knocked out.

Just then Raven notices something strange about a prisoner.

RAVEN

(Stares at the prisoner sitting against the wall appearing to be sleeping with his arms cross)

…

 

NESS

(Eyes still closed)

It's rude to stare beautiful.

 

RAVEN

(Emotionless to the comment)

You must be Ness then.

 

STARFIRE

(Sees Raven and flies to her)

Raven.

 

NESS

Wow, two beautiful ladies must be my lucky day.

 

STARFIRE

(Lands on the ground and then starts talking to her titans' communicator)

We found him.

 

NESS

Damn y'all here to kidnap me or somethin, as much as I'd enjoy that-

 

RAVEN

(Uses her power to throw a cell bar at Ness, but he grabs it)

…

 

NESS

(Gets the point to stop talking)

Ok feisty, I'll chill.

The rest of the Titans join Raven and Starfire.

ROBIN

So you're Ness.

 

NESS

(Instantly serious)

One and only.

 

RAVEN

(Thinking to herself)

Why did his mood change as soon as Robin talked to him?

 

ROBIN

I'm Robin, that's Beastboy, and I see you met Starfire and Raven. We are known as the Teen Titans.

 

NESS

(Stands up, towering over them in height)

Teen Titans huh? So what do you want with me.

 

ROBIN

We want you to join us, and possibly become our second in command.

 

BEASTBOY

I don't-

Robin punches Beastboy shoulder.

BEASTBOY

Oww, Hey!

 

NESS

(Smirks)

Why would I join you? I'm a criminal, a killer.

 

ROBIN

(Gets serious and hands Ness a letter)

Batman recommended you.

 

BEASTBOY

Face it Robin, he doesn't wanna join us. And he probably ain't that tough.

 

STARFIRE

Beastboy may be right Robin, maybe Batman has made the misjudgment on him.

 

NESS

(Finishes reading and puts away the paper)

Alright, I'll join but on but I got conditions.

 

ROBIN

What are your conditions?

 

NESS

It's some lone wolf things I gotta do sometimes, I'll let you know when ahead of time and shit, but I can cancel it when necessary.

 

ROBIN

I got conditions too, no killing.

 

NESS

See that's my problem right there. There comes a time where I have to get my hands bloody Robin, we let some of these guys live they'll come back and kill you eventually. I'll follow your rules to a point but if I can't be them your way, don't expect me to die for you guys in a non-killing way.

 

ROBIN

(Smirks)

Then we'll just stop you.

 

BEASTBOY

(Thinking to himself)

Good Ima kick his ass right-

 

ROBIN

(Holds his hand out)

We got a deal?

 

NESS

(Smirks back and shakes Robin's hand)

Deal.

 

BEASTBOY

(Shocked)

What?! You're going to let him join us. Cy would-

 

ROBIN

(Glares at Beastboy)

Respect my decision as leader.

 

BEASTBOY

(Glares back)

Whatever if he kills us or the bad guys it's your fault, leader…

At that moment Beastboy storms off, fist swinging with Starfire following with a concern look on her face.

NESS

Alright I got places to go where you guys and ladies live?

 

ROBIN

In big building shaped as a T on a island in Jump City.

 

NESS

(Leaves the cell and ignores a glare from Raven as he walks away)

Ight.

 

RAVEN

(Doubtful)

You sure about this Robin?

 

ROBIN

I don't know but I trust Batman.

And with that our heroes leave Kill City to wait on Ness to come to the tower.

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FADE IN:

INT. TITAN'S TOWER NIGHT

We are now in the Titan's Tower living room with our Titans waiting on Ness.

BEASTBOY

(Pacing back and forth in anger)

You see Robin, I knew we shouldn't trust him.

 

ROBIN

(Sitting on the couch)

He'll be here.

 

STARFIRE

Well if Robin trust him I can give him the benefit of the doubt.

 

BEASTBOY

He's a criminal he can never be one of us.

 

NESS

(Comes in carry bags, still in his jail outfit with Raven next to him)

A lot of hostility in the air.

 

STARFIRE

(Flies to Ness and gives him a Starfire hug)

A welcome to the team friend Ness. I know we're going to be the greatest of friends.

 

NESS

(Slowly losing air as he lets go of his bags)

I hope so too...

 

RAVEN

Star, you're killing him.

 

STARFIRE

(Realizes and lets go apologetically)

Oh I'm sorry!

 

NESS

(Gets his breath back)

It's cool, would of been a ok death for a guy.

 

STARFIRE

(Laughs)

You're very funny friend Ness.

 

ROBIN

Welcome to the team Ness, Raven will show you to your room since yours are next to each other.

 

NESS

Tru.

 

RAVEN

(Leaves, floating into the hallway)

Come on...

 

NESS

(Follows)

Sure my queen.

As Ness goes into the hallway he finds Raven standing by their rooms.

RAVEN

(Starts going to her room)

There's the room.

 

NESS

(Smiles)

Thanks beautiful.

 

RAVEN

(Holds Ness to the while with a giant dark hand out of annoyance)

Don't call me that, my name is Raven.

 

NESS

(Looks Raven in the eyes with no fear)

Still beautiful when mad, you are interesting Raven but I'll try my best not to call you something you are.

 

RAVEN

(Lets him go)

Whatever...

 

NESS

(Watches as Raven goes in her room)

I think someone lighten up a bit. Big money beautiful women, man that shit may be the death of me.

As Ness goes into the room he sees a white walls, blue carpet floor, a gigantic closet, a plain bathroom, a white sheet covered queen size bed with wooden dressers on each side of the head rest side of the bed.

NESS

(Smirks)

This room has potential.

Our hero looks out of the wall size window in his room enjoying the view. Meanwhile we now see Robin talking to Batman once again on his special communicator…

ROBIN

We got him on the team now.

 

BATMAN

(In holographic from standing at Robin)

Has he proven himself of my praise?

ROBIN

(Standing with his hand on his chin)

We haven't seen him in action yet but one thing bothers me.

BATMAN

(A curious expression appears on his face)

And what would that be?

ROBIN

On our way there, we heard a police distress call about a man described like Slade who had killed a lot of the people in the prison. But when we was there he was nowhere to be found, what could of happen?

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We are now shown the flashback of Ness battling Slade...

NESS

Hmm I'll be damned if I die at the hands of a robot.

 

SLADE

(Shocked)

How could you know that this is a fake?

 

NESS

Robots have a lot of electricity, I can since a lot of electricity in you.

 

SLADE

But your powers are disabled.

 

NESS

Only the cuffs the Prison had budget cuts, but your robot…

As soon Ness finish his sentence, he blasts and incinerates the fake Slade into the cell across from him.

NESS

(Sits back down against the wall with his arms cross.)

Always a step ahead.

Later after the Titans left the Prison, in the property room...

NESS

(Searching)

Hmmm where are they?

Finds a box with his name on it.

NESS

(Holds up dual blades)

Ah I missed these. Now to go get my stuff the rest of my stuff.

With the flashback ended we are now returned to Ness's room…

NESS

(Smirks then brings out the white shade for the window)

I came a long way. Looks my journey begins huh Batman?

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Closing:

Credits

Teen Titans

Ness

Teen Titans owned by DC

Villains owed by DC

Now I know what you're thinking. Fost you don't know what we're thinking. Haaa! Got em! Anyway yes there will be longer battles, yes I'm bringing in Original characters from other people. Yes I'm still accepting OCs, and yes I take suggestions and criticism well. So haters, if you wanna say my story is trash or sucks, or even that you wish I would die because you assume I'm pussy or just a nigger, just know I give no fucks because...(threat removed). Hope you guys enjoyed.