To all the people following this fic, I have some bad news and good news.
Bad News: There is a good chance that I will have to remake this fic, I have read through the chapters over and over again and always felt something was wrong but can't see where it was.
Now though I realized that the missing chapters were on the Main characters backstory. At first I wanted to keep the events during the huge time skip secret for longer but as I read through the chapters, especially when I started to enter Jiayi's storyline I realized that as a reader that shits just confusing as hell.
Especially since I placed quite a ton of backstory to the MC, literally shoving a billion unknown OC's here and there and not giving time to explain. Honestly even for me it was quite an annoying and difficult read. But as I read through it I came to conclusion that what this fic lacks is the backstory in that sense the bad news is that this fic may get remade. I have stocked quite a bit of chapters and on the backstory of the MC. Now the question is should I remake it to start with a prologue arc of the MC's travels or should I remake it with less mystery and more focus on the MC's current life.
Good News: Remaking the series would mean that it would be a better read but it would take a month or so, especially since I need to rewrite everything, even the stock chapters I have.
The overall plan of the fic does not change though, the problem is not in the storyline or the plot I want to go with but with the writing and pacing of this fic, at least that is how I see it. So to the people still following this fic I want to ask leave a poll to you guys with all the plans I want to do for this story.
EDIT: When I was going to put this announcement up, a review was posted with almost the same opinions as I had. Though that review did better as I still saw this story in my authors perspective. In my defense I had the idea and characterization in my mind and just wrote on a whim so I guess the problem may stem from there. That said I hope you read the review before answering the poll, it really is a good point of view to consider.
The poll will go up when this announcement goes public, it will accept responses for a week and after that week I'll decide what to do then.
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Remake the whole thing from scratch! Don't skip the MC's world travels Votes: 7 77.8%
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Add some juicy backstory and keep the current story intact Votes: 0 0.0%
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Remake the whole thing from the start! Improve pacing, keep the initial idea of hiding MC's skip Votes: 1 11.1%
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I think it would be good to not add the prologue and keep MC's abilities unknown Votes: 0 0.0%
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Meh, its trash anyway do what you want Votes: 0 0.0%
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Don't scrap it, try to fix it with the succeeding chapters Votes: 1 11.1%
I don't have problemi regarding the background of the MC, i think there are many Power up in a short time, when he had the eyes some chapter next he make a sacrifice for another Power system. Altough i don't quite understand what he sacrificed, but wait a bit more for that and please don't make him so dense. There are many japanese novel where the MC is dense with the other gender, so let Japan do this and not you XD