But what that should mean, it's like a game, but instead of being an adventurer, I'm a monster, but what the hell, and even worse, I was reborn as a snake even though it was another being that I at least had members.
Doing what I have to try to adapt to start seems to be late, it will be dark and I have no food, shelter and I don't even know how to move properly to start I will check around to see if I am dangerous.
As I crawl I realize I am in a forest so far I am alone which is much better than being attacked.
The bad thing is that there is nothing to eat here, now thinking about it I’m a snake what should I eat, since I don’t have any more arms, that takes away many possibilities and even if I manage to climb trees I don’t think I can eat fruit I don't have any more teeth, I only have two fangs.
After all, as I am going to eat, that I know snakes usually kill using poison and eat smaller animals, that's what I should do, well it doesn't hurt to try, but first I have to find what to eat, except that in my surroundings there is nothing and it goes it will soon be dark I am afraid of what I may have here at night, as a precaution I return to the cave.
When I arrive I see if it is safe and if I am alone, everything looks like yes, but it doesn't last long, suddenly a bigger snake appears and sees me I get scared and I try to keep my distance but it is fast and it gets close I get desperate but it doesn’t attack me, it passes by my side and ignores me, I think it’s a good sign, it means that other snakes should probably ignore me too, even before I got down, more and more snakes appeared inside the cave, I am obliged to say I was shaking, most were my size but some were much bigger, it seems here it must be a nest I try to check their status but I can't get the only mine, some skill must be necessary to be possible.
Well, it's not such a bad start if anything attacks, at least I have this little army to protect me.
But this leads me to think that these snakes were reincarnated like me, not impossible they would be acting differently they would try to communicate these here are just ignored, but and if there are other reincarnates they must probably have reincarnated as humans or as monsters just like me, I will think and resolve it soon.
interesting, the only problem is the translation, i think maybe you might come across a fan who could do that for you though if you continue to rise. Good luck on your writing journey, you definitely have my read.
ok nice.
Thanks
Blob Neutral
Snakes eat each other wtf.
https://img.ibxk.com.br/2016/08/29/29095334449043.jpg
@Super14 they're planning to eat each other. lol
Too many “TO”
“Doing what I have to try to adapt to start seems to be late, it will be dark and I have no food, shelter and I don't even know how to move properly to start I will check around to see if I am dangerous.”
Seven “to” In that single sentence? Even though I’m not good at English using same word as much as twice in single sentence makes the word weaker and repetitive to actually leave desired impact so try not to use same words again and again. ( To isn’t exactly the “word” but 7 is too much)
Ok.
as for what queenbird says i think slither is appropriate since it refers to the special way of crawling use to move
"I was reborn as a snake even though it was another being that I at least had members"
I was reborn as a snake even though i was a being that at least had members
"Doing what I have to try to adapt to start seems to be late"
Now it seems to be to late to try to adapt to my new self
"how to move properly to start I will check around to see if I am dangerous."
to start -> for starters
to see if i'm in danger
"and it goes it will soon be dark I am afraid of what I may have here at night, as a precaution I return to the cave".
and as it goes....
When I arrive I see if it is safe and if I am really alone, everything looks like yes,
everything looks okay/clear/safe
me I get scared and I try to keep my distance but it is fast and it gets close I get desperate but it it doesn't attack me, it passes by my side and ignores me
but i get desperate as it quicly close on/approach me surprisingly it doesn't attack me and just passes by my side while ignoring my existence
it seems here it must be a nest I try to check their status but I can't get only mine, some skill must be necessary to be possible.
It looks like i'm in a snake nest, i try to check their status but it seems that i can only see my own,
Well, it's not such a bad start if anything attacks, at least I have this little army to protect me.
It's not such a bad starting line , if anything attacks i at least have this litlle army as a protection
welp done here for now i will stop correcting but do tell me if you need help
Good luck mate
A tradução está meio errada, tente escrever da forma mais formal possível e tenha cuidado com as vírgulas, assim o Google tradutor deve poder traduzir direito.
As I crawl
He is a snake it should be slither or something similar.
I think so, but either way he is a snake and he is crawling on the ground, the movement of snakes varies by species, but in general they all crawl.
@Super14
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