- Shari -
After I calmed down from my mental turmoil the journey is proceeding smoothly.
When we pass the village at the crossroad to the estate, I have to hide my face again within the hood to avoid raising unwanted attention or causing a mass panic.
It's almost weird, but the news about the destruction of the estate apparently hasn't reached this place yet.
At least everyone looks calm.
This might be due to the fact that the count gave an order that no one leaves the grounds.
The reasoning might be that if our enemies would hear that we took heavy losses but managed to survive, they may want to finish us off.
So no one, not even the servants, should be able to spread this story.
This comes in handy for me as it's granting me a bit more time till the participation of two certain slimes in this incident will be disclosed.
The only ones who could expose us might be the enemy soldiers who escaped.
I don't know if any survived, but even if that's the case I doubt that they would directly spread such rumors.
Instead, it's more likely that they would regroup at their headquarters.
I'm quite sure that the common soldier isn't able to run directly to the big boss of some great conspiracy.
So our job is also to request at the royal palace that reinforcements and supplies be sent before anyone else can send their troops for different reasons.
Even after we leave the settlement I continue using the hood.
I don't like it but have to pay attention from now on as there'll be more people on the road.
But it should be safe, as I am well-hidden among our group, even with my secretive appearance.
The journey proceeds smoothly.
Even Alec isn't making as many problems as I thought but diligently looks on the road for hostiles.
The others do the same, while half of the crew is taking their chances to rest.
If not for our weapons, which are hidden under a rack that we all can access quickly, we look like a perfectly normal group of travelers.
Men, women, and a child, all of us in casual clothes.
It should be hard for our enemy to spot that there's something unusual about us.
Speaking of the enemy, I'd like to hear the others' opinions about this situation.
Whoever is against us had exceedingly vast military power at their disposal.
"I am still curious where such an army even came from. Such a large band of mercenaries or private army should be known, but what I gathered was that none of the other soldiers had even an idea who they were." (Shari)
"That's because they weren't natives. It's very likely that they came from Koreso, along with their weapons." (Dion)
"Koreso? Does this mean this is an invasion?" (Shari)
"Unlikely. If that's the case they wouldn't attack at such a small scale. Rather this might be an act of politic treason, aided by outer forces." (Dion)
"How can this be? I mean, who has so much power that they can move such a number of troops through the land? I know you said someone who can silence any raised questions, but who concretely is able to do such a thing?" (Shari)
"You already answered your own question." (Dion)
"Sorry, you lost me there." (Shari)
"Only the highest instance of power could perform such an outrageous act. Considering that we can exclude the king from this list, this leaves one of the four pillars." (Dion)
Okay, that is outrageous.
The four pillars are the greatest powerhouses in Rakis.
One for each cardinal point, with the capital as the center.
The three marquis, who control the lands from their respective towns, and the marshal of the army, as the one who keeps the creatures from the Barrens at bay.
Regarding loyalty, I don't believe the marshall would have his job if he wasn't trustworthy.
This leaves the marquis.
"Do you believe it was the lord of Ekoras? After all, the count's son was held captive there." (Shari)
"Such baseless assumptions can be dangerous. Also, I doubt it. The marquis of the south is a weak man, evident in the state of his own territory. I cannot see him as the leader of a conspiracy." (Dion)
So not this guy.
And I barely know anything about the others.
"And who do you think is responsible?" (Shari)
"My bets are on the one who controls the only passage to Koreso. The marquis of the west, Leronne Eras." (Dion)
Honestly, I don't know a thing about this man.
Only that the marquis of the west is also the master of Siras.
The second largest city in Rakis and maybe the wealthiest.
All the trade to Rakis runs through this chokepoint of a city.
That is to say, Rakis is quite isolated with only Koreso as his direct neighbor.
So the assumption that the lord of the west has some shenanigans going on isn't too farfetched.
But high-treason?
That's quite much.
"Isn't this claim a bit bold? There are certainly some officials powerful enough to bribe the right men to even overlook invading foreign soldiers. They'd just have to occupy the right positions." (Zeon)
"That's certainly true, but I'm a friend of considering the most simple explanation first. For my option, it just needs a single man to use his power to make things happen. In your depiction, you'd need so many nobles with such accumulated power, that they can prevent information from spreading. And this while they have to convince all the usual officials who handle such things, always at risk to get exposed. I don't know how it's for you, but I believe my version is more likely." (Dion)
Seems like Zeon lost this discussion.
However, it's still a dire thought.
If it's like this, the country is on the verge of a rebellion that might be fatal.
Forget about the many losses such a civil war will bring, if the army gets diverted from the border and significantly weakened, we might as well invite the hordes of the Barrens to come and eat us.
This country can't afford a conflict.
One more reason to keep the sole heir to the throne safe.
Those might be worrisome prospects with this naive girl on it, but an heir brings legitimacy, and any harm to her would weaken the king's position.
No, this certainly wouldn't be good.
But I should also focus on my own well-being.
We're heading right now to the goddamn capital.
If there is a more dangerous place for a monster like me, I wouldn't know.
Dion's influence might be helpful but there's always the chance of stupid, rash reactions from narrow-minded people.
Also, I'm glad I've dug out my powder from the catacombs, so I can hide my very special features in the worst case.
On the other side, I worry if this will be enough.
The guards at the capital are surely more professional than those in Ekoras.
"Dion, do you really think we can enter so easily?" (Shari)
"You have your adventurer cards with you, which should help. Aside from this, I have a document with us from our lord which should grant us free passage. If we can stay inconspicuous, it should be a mere formality. Which reminds me, how is Liqu?" (Dion)
"You mean is she going to blow our cover and cause a ruckus?" (Shari)
"I wouldn't word it like that, but I wanted to know if she will act as a separate entity at that time." (Dion)
"That might prove difficult. She's still weakened. She might slowly recover but we don't have the resources to generate her a whole new body, and we can't halt to hunt something big enough." (Shari)
Also, her state might make it even worse for her to play a convincing role.
- "You know, as I said, I think I could." (Liqu)
- "Really? Wouldn't you be a bit sluggish?" (Shari)
- "Don't know. Depends on how strained I would be." (Liqu)
As things are, I'm stuck with this slime for a bit longer.
It sounds best to pass the checkpoint with her stored safe and then within the city, we'll buy her some food so she can generate a body.
Next Zeon stares.
"So you really have her consciousness inside you? Isn't that strange?" (Zeon)
"It's totally weird. But I could endure it until now and apparently will do so for a while longer." (Shari)
"The bad side of this is that, in the case of an attack, she would be more helpful." (Alec)
"Hey, I can stand my ground." (Shari)
"But you can't annihilate a whole battalion of hostiles on your own. You're already struggling in close combat." (Alec)
"It was enough to own your ass. I'm just not good with dissolving things, or rather people. I don't want to." (Shari)
Alec sulks after this comment.
"This inability could prove as a fatal weakness in a fight." (Zeon)
"Still, I don't want to dissolve humans." (Shari)
I like to state this, as it might make me look better if I'm no man-eater.
"By the way, how did you two manage to get out of the fight in such a pristine condition? I've heard it got pretty bad and you said yourself that the elite got hit particularly hard." (Shari)
"Tsk, I was simply smart. The others were so eager to go where the fight was the worst. And subsequently, they got the backlash of such recklessness. Different from them I just did my goddamn job. Maintaining the position, staying alive, and holding the line is as valuable as everything else." (Alec)
Hm, to me this sounds like a nice way to describe cowardice.
He just abstained from getting close to where the fight was the worst.
And because of this, he came almost unscathed out of this battle.
"And you Zeon?" (Shari)
"Uh, it's an embarrassing story." (Zeon)
"More embarrassing than what Alec just told us?" (Shari)
"Hey, I did my job as well as it was possible in that situation!" (Alec)
Truly, I can't blame him.
It's not like one can expect a soldier to risk their own neck more than the orders afford.
Personally, I wouldn't go that far.
However, I was about to hear an embarrassing story, and he won't deny me this.
"So, how did you survive that fight? From what I've gathered, you seem to be the kind to give it their all and head to where it's quite dangerous." (Shari)
"Well, yeah. And that was the reason why I couldn't fight any longer." (Zeon)
I don't really understand.
He doesn't look as if he sustained any greater injuries.
"Seriously?! You burned through? That's like the absolute basics they taught us!" (Alec)
"Uggh." (Zeon)
Burned through?
What does he mean?
Zeon looks as if that was a mortal blow to his honor.
"Excuse me, but what are you referring to?" (Shari)
"He basically just admitted that my approach was the right one." (Alec)
Zeon isn't even retorting.
Was it so bad?
"Sigh, I'm going to explain it. 'Burning through' is a lax term the elites use to refer to the occasion that they used their body enhancement too severely. A human body can only store so much magic. If it's completely depleted, the body will lose all its strength. For a soldier practicing body enhancement, this can lead to a state where they're no longer able to move. Which is a bad thing to happen in a fight. A normal soldier, naturally, doesn't have to worry about such a thing since they don't touch their reserves." (Dion)
I look over to Zeon.
"It's as he says. As soon as I became aware of the attack I sprinted in the direction of the enemy. With my increased speed, I was able to dodge any projectiles coming my way and took out a good number of their crossbowmen. Yet, rushing from one position to the other drained me far quicker than I anticipated, and before I knew what had happened, I was lying flat on the ground. My officer noticed what happened and knew that I wouldn't be able to fight for the rest of the day. So they dragged me back to the headquarters, where I was bedridden for the rest of the day without as much as a scratch. And this even throughout the whole final battle." (Zeon)
Uh, okay that's pretty embarrassing.
At least, it earned him some chuckles from the soldiers on the carriage.
But there's one good point to it.
The general mood got better and things settled down with this problematic group.
I can only hope this will last.
The carriage might need four to five days till we reach our destination.
The atmosphere and common temper might take a turn for the worse during that time.
But maybe I'm worrying too much.
With some luck, everything's going to be fine.
Glad she imagines nothing bad will happen. If she starts imagining what could go wrong it would clutter the narrative.
Thx for the chap.
"He basically just admitted why my approach was the right one." (Zeon)
That's should be (Alec) no ?
With some luck, everything's going to be fine.
Hhmm, seem like she never learn huh ?
Thanks, no idea how those name switches always get past me.
Slimes have a really hard time changing their ways. It's ingrained in their cores. Poor Shari, seems like she will continue with this.
"Murphy's law" has joined the chat
Silver lining for him burning out, they got another elite to protect the princess. Blessing in disguise me thinks. Thanks for the chap!!
Editing
crossroad to the estate I have > crossroad to the estate, I have
we with great losses managed to survive they could want to finish us off. > we took heavy losses but managed to survive, they may want to finish us off.
So no one, not even the servants should spread this story. > So no one, not even the servants, should spread this story.
regroup at their headquarter. > regroup at their headquarters.
at the royal palace to send reinforcements and supplies before > at the royal palace that reinforcements and supplies be sent before
It should be hard to spot for our enemy > It should be hard for our enemy to spot
These thoughts make me think that I would like to hear others' opinions about this situation. > These thoughts make me want to hear the others' opinions about this situation.
I know, you said someone > I know you said someone
lands from their respective towns and the marshall > lands from their respective towns, and the marshall (Is the double ‘ll’ intentional? Because ‘marshal’ would be the normal word used but you have it misspelt multiple times in this chapter.)[After a bit of research, I found that apparently ‘marshall’ is used in British English for proper names for stores and people. My word processor lights it up as misspelled though.]
Such baseless assumptions can be dangerous. However, I doubt it. > Such baseless assumptions can be dangerous. Also, I doubt it. (However is used to join opposing ideas. For example, ‘Such baseless assumptions can be dangerous. However, I think you may be right.’)
And who do you think is now responsible? > And who do you think is responsible?
shenanigans going with them isn't > shenanigans going on isn't
If it's like this the country is a the verge > If it's like this, the country is at the verge
border and significantly weakened we might > border and significantly weakened, we might
heir brings legitimacy and like this, any harm to her would weaken the king's position. > heir brings legitimacy and any harm to her would weaken the king's position. (Not sure what the ‘like this’ was supposed to mean here?)
monster like me I wouldn't know. > monster like me, I wouldn't know.
In any case, I'm glad … special features in the worst case. (One or the other, you don’t need both in the same sentence here)
stay inconspicuous it should > stay inconspicuous, it should
You mean if she's going > You mean is she going (‘If you meant to ask is she is going…’ is just shortened to ‘You mean is she going…’)
I wouldn't word it like this, > I wouldn't word it like that,
whole new body and we can't halt > whole new body, and we can't halt
As things are I'm for a bit longer stuck with this slime. > As things are, I'm stuck with this slime for a bit longer.
Isn't this strange? > Isn't that strange?
The bad side about this is that in case of an attack she would be more helpful. > The bad side of this is that, in the case of an attack, she would be more helpful.
Alec becomes moping after this comment. > Alec mopes after this comment. (‘broods’ or ‘sulks’ may fit better. ‘Mopes’ works, but sounds odd to me.)
embarrassing story, and won't deny me this. > embarrassing story, and he won't deny me this.
So, how did you survive this fight? > So, how did you survive that fight?
From what I've gathered you seem to be > From what I've gathered, you seem to be
If it's completely depleted the body > If it's completely depleted, the body
A normal soldier naturally doesn't have > A normal soldier, naturally, doesn't have
As soon I became aware > As soon as I became aware
I anticipated and before I knew what happened I was lying > I anticipated, and before I knew what happened, I was lying
back to the headquarter, > back to the headquarters,
chuckles from the militaries on the carriage. > chuckles from the soldiers on the carriage.
I see Shari refers to it as dissolving instead of eating when it comes to humans. Nice distinction there.
Thank you!
So no one, not even the servants, should spread this story. - Maybe are permitted to spread, since it's about that they are forbidden to talk about the event.
These thoughts make me think that I would like to hear others' opinions about this situation. > These thoughts make me want to hear the others' opinions about this situation. - Not sure if my formulation was the best. Just wanted to point out that her trail of thought led to this.
heir brings legitimacy and like this, any harm to her would weaken the king's position. > heir brings legitimacy and any harm to her would weaken the king's position. (Not sure what the ‘like this’ was supposed to mean here?) - I was thinking here about the act of harming/killing her. Subsequently it would weaken the dynasty. Also, grammarly wants a comma before and.
So they dragged me back to the headquarters, where I was lying in a bed - A better idea than lying in the bed? Don't like the repetition to lying flat on the ground (though that one can be switched in its place).
In this case it was also about the intended goal of the action. If used as a means to attack and destroy the body she's more focused on the dissolving aspect and less on consuming something. Though, she also subconsciously avoids thinking about cannibalism.
@expentio
If you want to make this clearer, there are two ways to do it.
So no one, not even the servants, should be able to spread this story.
/or
So no one, not even the officers (\elites?), are permitted to spread this story.
The first is that the count’s order that nobody is able to leave would restrain servants who may decide to gossip if they could. The second, is to point out that even ones who may normally be spreading news, are not permitted. Most readers are aware that servants tend to gossip if able, but usually don’t have permission, so pointing out that they don’t have permission is somewhat redundant.
These thoughts make me want to hear the others' opinions about this situation. – I think this works, but if you want an alternative, maybe – Speaking of the enemy, I’d like to hear the other’s opinions about this situation. (‘Speaking of’ and then a previous topic, can be used to relate previous thoughts or discussion to the next one.) Something similar to, ‘That reminds me, I’d like to hear the other’s opinions about this situation.’
Those might be worrisome prospects with this naive girl on it, but an heir brings legitimacy, and any harm to her would weaken the king's position. – Grammarly is probably correct here.
where I was bedridden for the rest of the day without as much as a scratch. – Should fit here.
Also - drained me far quicker thanI anticipated, - You made a typo when you edited it.
@Saril1489
So no one, not even the servants, should be able to spread this story. - I like that more since I wanted to point out that they're more likely to spread rumors and aren't part of the military and not as bound to the count as soldiers. (The latter kind of insubordination can get you killed)
Speaking of the enemy, I’d like to hear the other’s opinions about this situation. - Thanks, I think this sounds better.
Ah, bedridden! Good word. Poor guy to miss out on the final fight.
Those might be worrisome prospects with this naive girl on it, but an heir brings legitimacy, and any harm to her would weaken the king's position.
Thats probably one good thing of the whole ordeal. The princess will get a lot of life experience and might lose a significant portion of her naivity.
Her being the next queen would obviously be amazing for out two slimes but I doubt such a turnover will happen for quite some years and a child-queen would be a recipe for disaster. I could see storylines developing from this whole dilemma, lets see where dear author takes us and out slimy protagonist.
I wonder if Liqu can build up and super compress mass while inside of Shari, (maybe fill out her figure a bit at the same time ) and then simply pop out when in a scuffle as the ultimate surprise attack, No one expects the chest burst dissolving slime surprise!
"Alien" could be a good movie at the time, but are we ready for "the Slime: Passenger of Shari"?