Chapter 21 - Shards (cont.)
That seemed faster than I expected but then we weren’t back at Mecchen yet. The area around the cab seemed vaguely familiar. I glanced around a few times 'til I realized where I recognized it from.
I remarked, “This area looks just like the Ishida family home from the records Shioriko found for us.” Jamie raised his head and looked around a few times before giving a nervous nod and drawing Tara’s plushie closer to himself. Keiko confirmed this as well.
Hitomi walked along the curb as the cab zipped off. “In a way. It’s based on my memories. And a bit of imagination.” She gestured for us to follow.
I had a weird sensation as we walked. It felt like a scenery strip from an old cartoon. The same set of houses repeated with one styled like the Ishida house in the middle.
Jamie coughed. “Imagination, huh?”
Hitomi waved her hand. “I paid less attention to small areas I didn’t expect the three of you to visit. So, I just filled them in with little reminders of our past.”
Keiko rubbed her hands. “So, you never expected us to visit Nina?”
“Not until now.” She paused and turned into a driveway. We followed her up to the door and she gave a hard knock.
Silence save the slow flow of the wind followed ‘til a lock turned inside, and the door cautiously opened out. Nina poked forth her head, and her eyes caught sight of Hitomi. With a sudden push, she sailed out the doorway and into Hitomi’s arms, hugging her profusely.
“You’re back! Thank you again!”
Akiko darted away. Bewilderment flowed between us as we exchanged looks. By the nervous expression I saw on Hitomi’s face, I figured she hadn’t entirely expected this as well.
She cleared her throat. “You don’t have to thank me. I just… uh… did what I had to.”
Nina backed away carefully. “I can’t even imagine the words to thank you.”
Hitomi twitched a little. “It was just a side effect. I wanted to keep everyone in line and happy.”
Nina blushed, and her nose twitched. “You really didn’t have to… it’s such an honor that you did.”
Jamie sighed. “What in the heck is going on here?”
Hitomi declined an invitation of Nina’s to come inside. I had to ask Nina, “Do you recognize us?”
She gave a little nod. “Of course, and I especially remember your beautiful sister, Hitomi.” While she didn’t seem entirely normal, her memory certainly seemed unbothered.
Hitomi sat down and grumbled a bit. “Stop that. I didn’t do anything deserving of praise.”
Nina bowed again and offered us tea, which Hitomi also declined.
“You turned me into a girl. I don’t know how I can repay you!”
“You don’t.”
“But I must! I’ve always lived with a fear and reverence of women which bound my life. What you’ve done has freed me. I am in your debt.” Akiko stuck her nose out at Nina.
After rubbing her forehead a little, Hitomi said, “I was going to do something else to you today.”
Nina smiled. “You gave me this life. If you saw fit to take it away then…” Her nose twitched again and she looked at Akiko. They both regarded one another with their noses out, like an impromptu smell-off.
Akiko turned away first to explore a bit of curb with faded grass growing from it.
Hitomi took a few, long breaths. “But I did do something to you.”
Nina gave her a nod back. “I know, I could feel it when the others seemed to recede from me. I can only sense them in little snippets now.”
Keiko scooted closer to Hitomi. “What do you mean ‘the others’?”
Nina seemed to reach for something atop her head and looked surprised and alarmed when she found nothing. Her head dashed around for a moment before she seemed to remember where she was. “Why the voices and memories in my head. The white room where I once saw the sad little boy who reminded me of how I used to be. The… bars… no, that’s the same place. No, it’s somewhere else.”
Her eyes narrowed and her voice took on a sultry tone. “Hm. It doesn’t matter. All that matters is power. The power to take little boys and make cute, quivering girls out of them. Katsumi’s will, plus my inspiration will ravage this world in the embrace of loving darkness…”
As soon as that voice came, it passed, and something more resembling the normal Nina emerged. She crouched and tried fruitlessly to hide behind the open door. She brought her hands together. “I’m sorry. I don’t know why that one came out right then.”
Hitomi leaned against the wall as a projection of wind flicked at her hair. “It’s the others trying to reconnect with you…”
She turned to us. “Literal explanations would pass over the three of you right now. Instead, think of a plant spread across a vast, underground area. It projects upwards here and there, but you can’t see the intimate ties between each of the projections.” She fanned her hands. “One being, one spirit, but confined by many smaller existences with only brief glimpses of the whole.”
Jamie fiddled with one of his hair clamps, Keiko kept rapt attention, and I tried to visualize such a plant in my mind. Hitomi brought her hands together. “Again, a human name for them would be inadequate. Think of them instead as shards of a mirror, reflecting one another but shining on their own. Little pieces of a single existence.”
Nina hid her face behind the door, and Akiko took a keen interest in her.
Jamie pressed on his forehead near his eyes, creasing his skin. “Fair enough. Wouldn’t be the oddest thing. So then what did you do to her, if not blow away her memories?”
Nina peered out with those large, brown eyes. Akiko crept nearer, as though she were trying to hunt her. Nina made a squeaking noise and dashed behind the door. Akiko blinked but held her ground.
Hitomi flexed her wrist. “If she were any normal person with a connection to the three of you, I could have easily muddled her memories to make sure I limited her… ‘lumpiness’. But because each piece is distributed, I needed to take more direct measures.”
She fingered the wind charm on her neck with a frown. I wasn’t sure if I liked where this was going. Keiko seemed unsure what to say next, and Jamie glared at Hitomi. Akiko was still creeping her ways towards Nina. She kept a tenuous hold on me as well, though she was at the limit of her reach.
Hitomi stood beside Nina, who looked up with concern, and put a hand on her shoulder. “I saturated her roots. It wasn’t my first choice, but it had the most benefits for me.”
Nina’s nose twitched again. Eventually letting go, Akiko snuck beside the open door. Jamie rubbed the plush and asked, “Which means?”
Before Hitomi could answer, Nina leapt at her as Akiko made her move. Akiko clung to the wall and watched Nina hug Hitomi tight.
With a sigh, Hitomi replied, “It means she’ll be confused for long enough.”
The wind suddenly picked up and the rain started again. Keiko scooted closer to Hitomi and asked, “Will she be okay?”
Nina answered for her. “I’m fine. My thoughts are a little woozy, but I’m so happy I could thank the one responsible for healing my life.” She stepped away from her embrace of Hitomi with her head bowed and cheeks dusted with red. “Whatever time you’ve given me, I feel honored for every moment, and I will treasure them all my life.”
Hitomi looked away from her. I thought I saw her face give a little spasm. She took a ragged breath and said, “Go inside. Stay in the center of the house, away from anything heavy, and keep yourself safe.”
Nina nodded quickly. “I promise.”
Hitomi pressed her hand against the wall. “We… have to go.”
Nina added a little smile to her next nod. “It has been an honor. See you!”
Hitomi dashed to the street.
I tugged on Akiko. It took a great effort to separate her from the porch. Hitomi was doubled-over and standing in the street. Her eyes trembled like when I first met her. She panted.
Keiko touched her on the shoulder. The rain seemed slower but heavier. Jamie held the plushie Yumeko over his head ‘til it seemed clear it didn’t block the rain, and he returned it to hiding. He used his free hand instead and occasionally brushed off a stray droplet. Nina snuck back inside and shut the door.
Hitomi raised herself up.
“It’s not a memory. It doesn’t matter.”
Jamie rumbled a loud sigh. “Start making sense!”
Hitomi looked down the street. “Soon… it’ll all make sense… soon.” And she said something softly into the wind and spray which sounded like, “I hope…”
We caught another cab.
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The driver seemed identical to the last one. He had no brightly-colored hair like the cab driver yesterday, nor did he seem to possess any sort of personality. A Johnny Cab would’ve seemed more human.
We sat in the same positions as the last cab trip, only Akiko had a little more room because Keiko sat closer to Hitomi. She gazed out, as Jamie did. Her eyes still trembled a bit.
I gave Jamie’s shoulder a nudge. He coughed. “Why are we doing this?” Keiko turned her ear to listen.
“What do you mean?” I asked.
He shut his eyes. “We didn’t leave Mecchen when things got weird. We didn’t get out of town. We didn’t fight this. We’re still not fighting this…”
Hitomi turned. Her eyes had calmed. “Do you think you ever had a choice?”
“Of course we did. Everyone does.”
It seemed like Hitomi wanted to say something else. Instead, she just turned back to the window. Keiko put her hand on Hitomi’s shoulder.
Akiko curled up near me and pressed her face into the softest part of my arm. She shut her crimson eyes and seemed to sleep, but only for a moment before flashing them open again and jerking her head around. She soon settled again, only to do the same.
I felt warm feelings of aggravation and confusion about Akiko. It felt nice that she was here. At times, her presence just became a routine reality. But I kept reminding myself that she was the reason Ami was gone. If I didn’t, then it felt like Ami never existed at all. I also reminded myself, no matter the joy Nina expressed, that the face leaning against the far window was Nana’s face.
But I didn’t feel angry, same as I didn’t feel angry for what she had done to the ‘lumps’. I felt regret at revealing so much to Shioriko. She only seemed distressed in the end, especially compared with Carolyn. Nina seemed so joyful as well, despite her supposedly disrupted connection to the rest of her distributed ‘spirit’.
I stroked Akiko’s hair, and she pressed against the warmth of my hand. I didn’t look to see if Hitomi was watching, I figured she knew what I was doing.
The windshield wipers scuffed once.
The cab slowed and the brakes squeaked.
We were back.
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The cab sped off as we stood near the steps leading up to Mecchen House. The driver again asked for no fee.
The rain seemed heavier. Keiko huddled near Hitomi. The wind swirled a bit.
I thought I could hear far off thunder.
Hitomi turned around.
“It is time, my sisters.”
The wind pressed us towards the steps.
Jamie leaned back. “No! Why? What are you going to do?”
“I’m going to free you from your confinement.”
My heart seemed to flow with warm, pulsating sweat despite the cold, damp wind. I asked, “How?”
“In the way I learned.” Hitomi took the first step.
Keiko took the same step a moment later. Jamie and I held to the curb.
Jamie yelled through the wind, “THIS IS WRONG!”
Hitomi spoke softly against the wind, her words even clearer. “It was my plan from the beginning. It’s why I created this place, why I crafted Mecchen House, and all those who dwell within it.”
A phantom calm came over all things.
I could feel only my heart pushing warmth through my body.
I looked at Jamie. He panted, his head twitching a little.
Akiko squeezed my arm to the point of numbness.
Keiko’s question, spoken with gentle serenity, came next, “What do you mean?”
On the second step, Hitomi spoke again, her words resonated as though she were right next to my ear.
“I made the girls of Mecchen House into what they are. I traced Toki’s original… illuminations… in places, but I did what I had to do. And now… all of them will serve the purpose for which they were intended…”
Jamie screamed, clutched his plushie, and burst up the steps like a fissure in the ground itself. He launched past Keiko and Hitomi and out of sight. I rushed after him, Akiko tugging against me as I ran.
She whimpered in my ear and grunted again and again. I felt her hand slip out for a moment, but I looked back and seized her by the wrist.
Jamie shut the door just as we made our way to the top. I slammed it open again and neglected to remove my shoes on the way in. I slipped a few times against the floor and staggered around ‘til I came to the living room. All the girls were gathered there, and Tara held the dress that was once Ami in her lap. Tarps and storage boxes covered a few areas.
A breeze filled the room.
Tara looked right at me. She bowed her head. “I’m so sorry…”
The rest seemed to be in a trance.
Hitomi walked in with Keiko right behind her. She went up to Tara and gave her a pat on the shoulder. “Are you ready?”
Tara shut her eyes. “No. My regrets feel so heavy.”
She smiled at Tara. “You made all this possible, Aaron. Thank you.”
Tara shook her head. She seemed much older. “I made a mistake. I took pity on you. You reminded me of my daughter… so long ago.”
Hitomi pressed her lips. The breeze blew around the room. “Well… it doesn’t matter. I don’t need you to help me anymore. I just need you for Kimi.”
Tara curled her hand around a bit of her shirt and looked at Kimi. “Do what you wish to me. My life has already ended once. I am not afraid.”
Jamie took a step away. He, like I, seemed dumbstruck.
Keiko tugged on Hitomi’s arm. “I want to help you, but I don’t want anyone to get hurt. I just… I just don’t want there to be any more suffering.”
Hitomi gave only a faint smile and said, “I made all this for you and our sisters. Each girl in Mecchen House was specially-placed. This is their purpose. This is their destiny… And yours.”
Keiko squeezed her arm and gave a little nod to herself. “Alright… sister.”
Jamie shook his head with such force the clamps tumbled from his hair.
“NO!”
Keiko blinked. “What’s wrong?”
“All of this! Everything!” I held Jamie’s shoulder as he staggered.
I looked at Hitomi. My flame inside rose upwards. Mami shimmered a bit from her place on the couch. Her color flickered.
Jamie stared at Tara, who dipped her head low.
I held back the flame, but Mami’s color still seemed eager to flow towards me. It felt like fuel that my flame was eager to engulf.
Hitomi gestured upwards. “Yes, sister. She is meant for you. I saved those random scraps of paper that day. I saved them so they could be kindling for your brilliance.” She held her hands high.
The air tingled. The walls shuddered, as though breathing.
“It is time to serve my recipe to my sisters, so they may be nourished and awaken to their true selves!”
You know I was wondering, if Ami used to be a dress, the implication from this last chapter is that all Mecchen girls were household objects or former humans. Perhaps Nana was a computer? Anyhow, what I don't understand is, if Ami used to be a dress why is Hitomi so confused about the idea of turning a demon like Akki/Akiko into a girl?
I mean if you can turn Nina from boy into a plant demoness, or whatever she is, and Ami from dress into human, then Akiko should be a piece of cake.
After all, turning a dress into a human is hard, due to the fact you have to create a body and the mind, in the process of creating the mind you are already deciding on the personality, memories, likes and dislikes, etc.
Changing someone's gender is one thing but making a human is akin to giving birth to a new life. In which case Hitomi is Ami's mom.
But when Arisu turned the demon into Akiko all that shed to do was produce a new body for the demon, the mind was already there, so it should be way easier, not the whole virus analogy. If anything else creating Ami from a dress is more like the virus thing.
Nana's origin is explained in just a little bit. Why Hitomi is so blown away by the idea of Akiko is like if a scientist is told someone turned a black hole into another Earth. The virus analogy too. Or even like turning a literal "nothing" into a "something". It's such a leap from what Hitomi knows.
And so far as Nina, the plant thing is just an analogy. Nina is like a bunch of different people across reality who are spiritually-linked like spirit twins. Hitomi's maternal link is going to be another thing that comes up again soon.
Tara looked right at me. She bowed her head. “I’m so sorry…”
It's always the last one you suspect...
Indeed.
To be fair there were clues that Tara was going to help them, the whole Yumeko thing, not betray them.
@helzblack I'm not suggesting she's betraying them. It's just that she's really good at keeping up that childlike facade, occasional lapses into melancholy notwithstanding.
Akiko is so cute. Kind of reminds me of Snoopy or other characters that are in their own world while everyone else is worrying about something.
Thanks! I thought so too. I gave her a lot of attention because the idea of something/someone experiencing human things for the first time really intrigues me.
But I didn't feel angry, same as I didn't feel angry for what she had done to the 'lumps'. I felt regret at revealing so much to Shioriko.
Ugh. Not your decision to make buddy. Whether Shioriko wants to know was her choice not yours.
It's conundrum though. Would someone want to know their world is....well one analogy might hypothesize a simulation and we're just code in the construct....artificial? I do think it was the right call to let her know but it leaves Kelly wondering if he did more harm than good for her and others mental state in what could be The End.
@MajorKerina It's basically the same question as if I could prove that no gods exist, and people would believe me, should I do it?
I don't think anyone should do so, stripping people of their beliefs. If you can't do anything about the fact, then knowing isn't always better. So I'd say letting Shioriko know wasn't the right thing to do, it just causes needless damage that she can't do anything at all about. Someone else might disagree with me, though.
@EevieBeevie You can say, "I have evidence that the world is an illusion." Do you want me to tell you?
And depending on the answer you proceed. Also autonomy overrides the excuse of "needless damage". Imagine if you got terminal cancer, would you rather have the doctors tell you, giving you a chance to get some closure, say goodbye and live the final months of your life, or to just die suddenly and horribly not knowing what happened and no time to set anything right. The doctors might decide that it is needless damage to tell you and to better let you live the rest of your life ignorant, but I don't think most people would agree with dying without at least knowing why. It is condescending to think one gets to decide for someone else.
@helzblack Interesting and actually a key point going forward in the next few chapters.
@helzblack those two situations are not at all equivalent. Knowing I will not always be healthy and that I will some day die as well, are facts. If my remaining life is suddenly cut to a couple weeks, I can change my actions: do things I'd always wanted to do, arrange my finances, say goodbyes, et cetera.
On the other hand, knowing whether there actually exists a god or not does change your life in such a way. What would you do differently? Granted, many would definitely become priests if some god were proven true, or nuns would change their ways of life if all gods were disproven. But the belief does not impact my body in the same way cancer does.
A better comparison would be lying to children about Santa: is it not generally considered a rude act to shatter a child's belief in Santa?
A belief might be ingrained to the very being of a person. Be it because of misfortune, luck or something else, people might find solace in believing that they're "not alone", even if they knew they were wrong. Conversely, not believing in any deity might also bring confidence.
Of course, many people tend to not benefit from their beliefs: be it people who use it to harm others or harm themselves, history is full of people having harmful beliefs. While logically it would make sense to convince them of the "true nature of the world", I still believe it to not be any of anyone else's business.
As to Shioriko and this story: what did telling her about having her mind influenced improve? Now she knows a bunch of her memories were hidden, but what can she do about it? She knows she has absolutely no power to change it, or prevent it from happening again. That is undue stress over something she can't change at all. Though it is not a black and white situation: I can understand the other viewpoint. Just, in this case, I don't really agree.
@EevieBeevie I would never lie to children about Santa, seems pointless and cruel. I don't consider petty, pointless lies to be moral. Breaking harmful myths, like the antisemitism that caused the holocaust is everybody's business. Might be hard and difficult but it is good. We are connected, we don't live alone. If your neighbor believes that kidnapping people to sacrifice them to their god is good, then it becomes your business. We have a duty to help people reach their potential, we are not isolated hermits. We share a planet together.
Besides how do you know she won't find the information useful? What if Shioriko left unattended business, knowing that her memories of a past life aren't just her imagination could help her get closure. Or of she was taking care of an aching grandmother and nobody else was there for grandma. What if her parents or someone she knew also lived in Brookville but find themsekves tranformed with a different appeareance? Chances are now she can reconnect with those persons she lost contact with.
Even if there aren't any such persons in Brookeville given the chapter revelation that the three of them are some sort of goddesses it means once the current confrontation is over Keiko or Arisu or Jamie could help her visit her old family.
What if she was afraid she was crazy? Now she can worry about one less thing.
What if she had a heart condition as a boy in Brookeville, now she can check whether or not she still has it and prevent a medical problem down the road.
I always hear arguments like that, nobody has the right take people's hope/beliefs aways, they aren't harming anybody, etc:
1. You should check the story of Peter Poppoff and how he was faking miracles and how much money he made, after checking out that, the whole line about preversing people's hope is revealed to be a justification for predatory behaviour
2. Another story is that of curing cancer through the use of psychology. There are people out there, not cheap, that tell you that you should stop using evil "western" medicine, chemotherapy etc, and come to their clinic for psychothera[y. An example is in Germany's New Age movements in psychology. People ending up dying horrible deaths with the turmours advancing to the point they literally burst out and break the skin, in the case of a young woman with breast cancer, they stop they effective treatmnet and go to these psychopathic quacks.
They portrayals of faith healers is that of noble people, even if their treatments don't work, they still give out hope, so iy's a;right to lie, right? Somehow the people with actual cures are demonized because apparently science is evil and taking people belief's aways is bad. In the light of how much those beliefs don't stay beliefs and become actions. The harm of "taking people beliefs aways" doesn't seem so bad, in fact it becomes a moral duty.
It is about treating people with respect and dignity. To grow up is to abandon one's easy life and face the world full frontal. We cannot afford to lie to ourselves, that is what has been happening aobut climate change or racism. People cover their and telll you they don't want to know about racial discrmination in the police or the possiblity of global warming. Ostriches with their heads in the sand, that won't stop the flood of a hurricane.
The truth sets people free. I don't think that lying to people is right, you could say that Shioriko wasn't asked whether or not she wanted to know if her world was an illusion, that is to say the idea is that we should ask people before we break their bubbles. You know something, many times people aren't asked whether or not they wanted to be lied to. The assumption is that everyone wants the comfort of a lie to assuage and pacify one's inner demons. The lie is comforting and soothing.
The problem with lies, illusions and the tricks of charlatans is that like snowglobes one can't actually live in them, sooner or later someone's finds out the edge and food starts to run out.
Come to think of if that could have been a possible path this story had taken, if Hitomi had fallen unconscious we could have had a story of a group of friends finding out an unifinished world, where the farther out you are from Ogawa the more the dangeours creatures and the less real the world becomes, this chapter already highlights that. The psychological thriller of trying to actually live inside an illusion, a snowglobe with limited resoirces and time. Imagine Arisu could have told you that you were about to be served as food to teh gods, but she decided you probably were better off not knowing.
Actually trying to live a lie will always be painful, not hopeful, when the truth always hits you in the face.
We don't know if Shioriko has some gender dyspohiria, just how many people do you think Hitomi callous lies and illusion could have h?
Hitomi isn't a noble goddess, this chapter marks her as unconcerned with human life. So breaking out of the illusion is everybody's first prioirty.
tldr;
In fact how can anyone believe that keeping the lie of Ogawa is good when the inhabitants are food and tools for a cruel god. Breaking out of the illusion isn't evil. To go around saying, "but isn't hope just the best?, let's lie to keep it", plays right into Hitomi's hands.
But how could you know whether or not lying to Hitomi might harm her or help her if you don't even ask her preference or opinion. Do not assume everybody whishes to know the truth, but also do not assume everybody wishes to be lied to. First deign to talk to them, don't make that decision for them. You aren't qualified to choose people's lives for them, nobody but they themselves are.
@helzblack I'm not sure we are even disagreeing here (well, for this particular case, we are). Like I said, it's not black and white. Each situation is different, and the consequences vary. Sometimes it would be best to let it out, sometimes not destroying one's beliefs is bad.
And as for Peter Poppoff and such: I'm aware of those people, and think it should be criminal to profit off of people's misery like that. That said, I fully support people seeking non-traditional help *in addition* to traditional medicine, though in a way that does not try to profit off of it or otherwise cause harm.