The girls stay sleeping, soundly and quietly. I don't sleep, and just stand around. I guess i lost that ability when i got put into this body. Then something bad happens. I get hungry.
These people didn't seem to pocket any of the food from the doll party, so i can get some walking in or something. That marked the first of many decisions that would lead to monster encounters.
I'm walking through the forest without a care in the world when i see a small, round I squat down to get a better look. It notices me and hops over. I pet it with my little doll hands. What is that, I wonder.
Classification: slime
Species: blue slime
description: a small, soft, lower ranked monster that is similar to goblins in that it gangs up on stronger creatures. Together, they are quite the nuisanse.
Check stats?
Suddenly a sudden voice pops in my head, telling me everything about the creature before me. Unfornately, i react in a threatening manner, and jerk my hand down. Which makes the slime think i mean to hurt it.
Slime has lost 2 health
its current health is 8/10
slime has become ferocious
Slime has activated ally call
slime is preparing acid spit
A nice, short chapter but with broken English here and there.
The girls stay sleeping,
stay -> are
I don't sleep, and just stand around.
I don't sleep, and just stand around. -> I'm not asleep but standing around instead.
I guess i lost that ability when i got put into this body.
For both, i -> I.
I get hungry.
get -> got
when i see a small, round I squat down to get a better look.
when i see a small, round I squat down to get a better look. -> when I see a small and round thing, squatting down to get a better look at it.
Slime has activated ally call
ally call -> Ally Call
slime is preparing acid spit
acid spit -> Acid Spit.
Sorry if I sound obnoxious by pointing all of these out, I'm interested in the story so far. Just need more work on the grammars and phrasing, and capitalisations.
Other than that, take your time and keep up the work.
yah english is not my first language. Anyway i'll fix it when i get the time!