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hello every viewers, its me the author of this made for fun novel series. i would like to remake this series and i would like to have your opinion on the remake version. im still in high school and i am not a creative person. i can only spend so little time on this website to do some of my hobby like reading and writing. this is my very first novel and i would like create it with everyone reading this. every 12 hours after i posted my chapter i will make a poll to decide the next chapter's event, thank you.
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If you remake it, can you do not do the MC OP right of the bat an give a average strengh ? And not go for the super fast power up too like maybe wait a while for the haki power and make her go to amazon lily and learn it there.
For the 3 ability you can keep the same one if you want or maybe change the 'sword technique enhancement' with 'weapon mastery enhancement (sword)' because she know how the one piece world is dangerous and she need to become stronger faster ?
For the devil fruit, before I chose the cook one so I will talk for this. The power That I can see is the more delicious her food the more power she have. Like the more the food she cook and rare and powerfull the more she can boost her physical ability. Each ingredient can give her a boost only one time, that can make her search all the sea and earth for the best ingredient because only the food she made herself can give her the boost. Her sword technique will be used for cooking too, that would be fun.
And the body, plz, all character in One piece just have impossible barby body with the curvy and tall, etc. A cat girl is not supposed be 1m80-90 tall, she are supposed to be petite and cute
Here are my though. You can go with it or do as you want. That your story after all.
i actually have the same idea on the food devil fruit but i didn't think that most of my viewers would choose storm devil fruit, about the body........ give me your version of it and i'll write it down i'm the kind of person that can't describe others appearance and when i was writing about the body it took me 4 hours just to think about it.................
@HYT I can search a picture for the body ?
@Stonelight sure go on.......... i starting to pity myself.........
@HYT OH I found something on deviantArt who seem good. You even have a description of her below as an exemple.
Normal one:
https://www.deviantart.com/supurreme/art/One-Piece-OC-Miu-809191280
Sulong one:
https://file.toyhou.se/images/11243765_L70bYZiKQM4vT1i.png
She stay big in height but you can just change it and change all you want like her furr/eye color, etc, that just a picture for see a little. Don't take the picture later, that seem already be to someone. I give it just for see a little the body and all. Like, the guy have all the character description, he is good lol.
@Stonelight i can use this as an example and ask my friends to draw my version of this picture: https://www.deviantart.com/supurreme/art/One-Piece-OC-Miu-809191280
some of my friends (girl) etremely like to draw and make as many character as she want and i can ask her to draw a picture with this as an example but i might need some help in choosing the picture. she is a drawing maniac
@HYT If you need some help, when you have the pictures, you can make a poll here and ask what the reader want like with the devil fruit. Just give them a number, show them, and ask which one the readers like the most.
@Stonelight I should have never ask my friend to draw the picture,she went overboard and made atleast 75 picture........
@HYT xDDDD
@HYT Go through them and search the one who are more how you see your MC and select them. After that, you can go on and search THE ONE who show more the ideal MC thinking of her personaly, power, goal, combat style, etc.
@Stonelight this is the reason why I called my friend a drawing maniac.
@HYT Maybe she go overboard because you asked only for the MC .... If you had asked for her crew too (if you have the idea for them) you could maybe have less ... Just maybe ...
If you're not good with description that would be better if you do the one for her crew member before begining the story or way before she meet them. You take the idea of them on paper before introduce them and little to little you can search the best way to describe them. With that you will not have a problem with them later and your friend can satisfy her drawing maniac side.
The counter point is that the drawing will probably keep coming to you xD