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How do you guys like the pacing?
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Too slow Votes: 49 11.2%
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Too fast Votes: 59 13.5%
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Goldylocks Votes: 330 75.3%
Total voters: 438
105
LOL too fast for Slice of Life Genre and Too slow for anything else
Input accepted.
LOL perfection doesn't exist and if you have reached perfection then it isn't
(Goldylocks) -going into my vocabulary .
Also add words like this in story
Good idea, I'll try to work it!
I know there's more story but I felt like giving my input. I think that that story is moving at a good pace for the "setup" stage of the story. We're getting the girl, meeting the characters and figuring out the basics of the powers. After this though, you'll need to decide how you want to structure things (though of course the future is here and many more chapters exist).
I see two paths really. The first is letting a lot of things happen in the background, focusing on only the big important moments and keeping the story moving, never slowing down.
Second path is you dial it back. You let the characters live in the world. Stop and smell the roses type deal. The setup has been good. We know what the status quo is now so you don't need to be in a rush to change it.
Blob neutral
Bloop!
Mind explaining what Goldilocks is or is it just a random meme answer that some authors do when making a poll?
Goldylocks or goldilocks refers to an old folks story called goldylocks and the 3 bears. The answer to the poll basically just means perfection. Do you live in the States? It's a pretty common story in most states in the US.
Yep, just no one I know mentions it ever and I am from a foreign family.
@Invenatus That would explain it then. It's more of a story spread by word of mouth for little kids. There's a few children's books too.
@Horizon42 there is also the socalled goldilocks zone in astronomy, which is the zone around a star where a earthlike planet can exist