Chapter 12 : Wolf Girls (2)
*Is-is this really okay!?* Jun thought to himself as he watched the woman’s fluffy tail sway back and forth with anticipation while she worked at removing his belt. Finally, after growing annoyed with it she used one of her fingernails, which was about 2 cm, to begin slicing through the belt.
Jun wanted desperately to raise an objection… but the look of determination on her face was decidedly breathtaking...so he said nothing. After just one minute and several viscous tugs she managed to cut through his belt, the entire time Jun’s gaze was focused on her jiggling breasts and heaving bosom.
Afterwards she finally noticed where Jun’s gaze was directed, so she smiled, revealing two sharp canines in the process. She then leaned even closer to Jun, lifting herself so that her breasts could meet his lips. His eyes were now filled with both lust and embarrassment, it was clear to her that he was inexperienced with such things so she helped him out by gently pressing his mouth against her body.
Jun couldn’t help but be amazed at the taste of her skin, her nipple against his tongue was so soft and welcoming. He initially started out carefully but found himself taking more and more of her breast into his mouth, soon he was licking and sucking hungrily. Jun could feel her breath against his forehead, gently pushing aside a few stray hairs as she held him close and allowed his tongue to explore. Her hands gently rubbed the back of his neck and arm respectively during this time.
This only lasted for a moment however as lust overcame the braided woman. She shifted her position once more and began to focus on Jun’s neck, kissing and sucking as she started at his left earlobe and slowly moved downward. Jun clenched his fists in response as his body slowly turned to putty, the combination of moist heat from her lips and tongue made his body quiver, sending a sort of paralysis through his body at the same time.
She continued on like this for quite some time, but occasionally Jun would feel a slight discomfort as her fingernails poked into him. They were sharp, enough to pierce the skin so his pleasure was slowly being intermingled with pricks of pain.
Captured in the warm heat of ecstasy , the woman’s hands finally found their way back to Jun’s pants and began to quickly undo them. She seemed entirely unfamiliar with the invention of a zipper, but it took her less than thirty sends to figure it out, thus she revealed Jun’s throbbing member, which poked through his boxers. He watched her intently and took notice as her eyes grew hungry the second she wrapped her hand around his dick. Her lust was on full display for all to see as she licked her lips and began to move.
Jun, realizing what was about to happen, felt a last second bout of panic overtake him, after all the entirety of his sexual experiences happened within the last day.
“W-wait!” He whispered, but he soon found her finger pressed against his lips. She glanced back towards the sleeping woman near the dying campfire to express her thoughts. She paused only a moment to see that Jun had begun to calm down, at which point she removed her finger and ran her palm along his cheek.
She then grabbed the head of his dick and moved her hips closer, shifting her position so that she was now squatting almost directly above his hips. Jun could feel his heart beating wildly as he watched her press the head of his dick against her warm, wet body.
*Holy shit.* Jun thought, his mind going completely blank from the pleasure. The sensation was unlike anything he’d ever felt in his short life as the wolf girl’s body spread to welcome him. The soft moist flesh of her lips spread as she firmly gripped the tip of his dick and worked it up and down the length of her lips slowly. A hoarse moan escaped her lips, just barely audible, as her grip tightened around the back of Jun’s neck and he could feel the pressure of her hips driving down on top of his long, hard dick.
Suddenly the pleasure turned into a wince of pain as her fingernails dug into the back of his neck.
“O-ow!” Jun tried to lower his voice as he responded to the situation but the pain was burning. He glanced upwards, only to meet the eyes of a wild animal. Her normally amber colored eyes had taken on a bright yellow glow, and her gaze was that of pure, unadulterated longing. She clenched him fiercely, causing blood to trickle down his back as she began to slowly work the head of his dick into her tight body. With each slowly sinking moment Jun could only grit his teeth and clench his fists, the feeling of her warm wet body slowly opening to receive him was godly -- but her fingernails digging into his flesh was excruciating. He breathed deeply, loudly as he struggled to focus, caught between a heavenly sensation and slowly building agony.
Due to his girth the insertion was slow going, she’d barely managed to slide the entirety of his head into her body before she stopped to take a break, relishing in the sensation of Jun inside her. Thankfully her grip relaxed as she began to rock her hips in a circular motion. She couldn’t help but moan lowly as she threw her head back, caught up in savoring the sensation. Jun too was feeling the same as he focused on consuming every passing second, the heat of her body was incredible -- like a living furnace as she slowly slid further down along his shaft. Just when he felt he would be consumed…his gaze found hers and this time Jun froze in fear.
It seemed the lust had completely overcome his partner, despite the fact that they two hadn’t even started having intercourse yet. Her appearance was slowly turning into that of a beast as long turfs of hair began to sprout along her arms, chest and even her face. Jun watched in horror as her body began to grow more muscular, even her vagina clenched him fiercely and refused to let go until the woman’s body was covered in three centimeter long hair, all save her face, breasts and abdomen. Her body also grew approximately one size, so that she was more physically imposing.
*Werewolf?* Jun thought, it was the only thing he could think as the creature before him continued fingering the back of his head. Jun watched, mouth agape as she opened her own mouth, revealing sharp fangs and a rather long tongue.
*How many times do I have to die today? Am I in hell?* Jun thought as her monstrous bite moved towards him. So he did the only thing he could do -- shut his eyes and await his fate. Yet...after several seconds he felt a curious sensation as a weight was lifted from him.
The braided woman reacted with surprise as she was dragged off of Jun by force. He too was completely caught off guard at the sight before him. It was the other woman, dubbed “the responsible one” by Jun who saved him from being mauled in a fit of lust. She grabbed the werewolf by the back of the head and tugged, flinging it several meters through the air in the process.
The two then began to fight, as the werewolf launched herself at the woman. In the dim light of the cavern all Jun could discern were dueling shadows and the occasional sounds of the scuffle. Soon both of the women were creatures and fighting like wild beasts, with both claw and fang.
The brawl was so intense that Jun could feel the vibrations of their tussle and the snarling snap of jaws was enough to make him recoil -- despite the fact that they had moved further into the darkness of the cavern. The pair tussled with a strength and agility that a normal human would scarce be able to have. They took turns pinning down each other, scratching and biting as they struggled for supremacy. Finally, even in the darkness a shrill squeal revealed to Jun that the battle had ended, though he couldn’t see anything in the distance. Next he heard the sound of a monstrous thud, the impact of which shook even the hard ground of the cavern.
The young man waited with bated breath as he peered into the darkness. It would be several more agonizing seconds before a pair of cold, yellow eyes peered in his direction from the abyss and slowly began to make their way towards him. Jun could feel his blood running cold as a wave of uncertainty overcame him -- yet he couldn’t move! Gradually a figure began to take form and all Jun could do was to press his eyes shut and shiver to himself.
He could feel warmth just centimeters away from his face, but he dared not open his eyes.
*If I’m going to die..just do it!* He thought to himself. But instead he received…
A head pat. Jun cautiously opened his eyes to reveal the responsible one. She had a rather long gash along her chest, just above her left breast which extended almost to her collar bone. She also had a cut just beneath her right eye. Her eyes were still the same cold, glowing yellow color which seemed to hold a mystical quality even in the darkness. She was patting his head, though Jun didn’t feel relieved or comforted in the slightest.
Jun didn’t know what to make of the scene, especially when she turned and walked off into the distance. After a few moments she emerged from the darkness with a tied up companion. The other wolf girl’s legs and feet were both bound together and the responsible one tossed her next to the fire unceremoniously. The braided woman had reverted to her humanoid form and she looked to be unconscious.
The responsible one then strutted over to Jun who ,by now ,had finally found the will to move. He managed to get to his feet and make a mad dash for the cavern opening only to be snatched by the lycanthrope and pulled over towards the fire.
“L-let me go! Please!” Jun screamed as he struggled to get away from her grasp, but she completely ignored him. Instead, once they reached the fire she laid him down and took up a place behind him, spooning him for both warmth and protection in the process. Jun found the entire situation bizarre as he was forced to fall asleep, his dick still exposed as the responsible one embraced him tightly to prevent any harm from befalling him.
The icing on the cake was when the braided lycan’s eyes popped open and she licked her lips -- watching Jun until finally he could stay awake no longer.
Just my thoughts on the novel so far. I'll preface this by saying that I did read the description/synopsis so I fully understand that this is pretty much just smut. This will be a somewhat harsh review, but I am not trying to insult you or be mean. I am merely offering my opinion and constructive(hopefully) criticism.
But, that being said, I feel like there's something missing. We're 12 chapters in and I don't know what the plot is, and based on the synopsis, there should be one. I don't know what the MC wants, either. What his goals are. I also think that the first part of this web novel was a bit too drawn out without enough reason for anything happening. The setting wasn't clearly established. So the school is mainly a delinquent school... why? Bad neighborhood? Why is it mostly female? Is this version of earth matriarchal? Did the Queen fall off the building as well? Btw, how did that even happen? I know that Airi tackled her, but a description of that happening and how that lead to them falling off the roof would be very nice. That's not everything, but it is everything off the top of my head.
Now that that's through, I will say the smut scenes are well written but heavily lean towards femdom and reverse rape. Not that that's a bad thing, but a warning about that in the description would be well received, I think. (Unless it's there and I'm just blind.) For what the novel is, (that being smut), it's more than decent. But like most things, there's always room for improvement, no matter how good you are.
Thanks for the feedback.
There's 2 ways you can portray info to the reader
1) Explain it.
2) Allow it to grow organically.
I prefer method #2.
Considering you're only 12 chapters in, it's natural that you wouldn't have a full grasp of the world as yet. So in that respect, you're right.
Pretty much every question you asked will be revealed as the book progresses.
@DreamOfRen Understandable, I will be eagerly awaiting further chapters, then. At the very least, I am intrigued with where this is going, which is a good thing.
It's amazing that Jun didn't reach his limit after two times of being molested.