I woke up, my arm was torn off, and I was being dragged by wolves. I found my severed arm. It was in the mouth of one of the wolves that was following, getting chewed on like a dog toy. I blacked out again.
I dreamed a voice was talking to me, talking in a weird language I didn’t understand, ‘I don’t care right now’ I thought, then it stopped, ‘Sorry’ and it resumed.
I asked why I couldn't understand it and as far as I knew it didn’t realize I asked anything. Then text appeared, and it was once again in a language I couldn’t understand. ‘I don’t know what this means, but I agree’ then I woke up again.
I was being eaten. I loved dogs, I loved them, until this moment. At this moment I wanted nothing more than to shoot these wolves. Then I blacked out again. The same text appeared and I could read it! How did I know it was the same? I just did. I still don't know how, but I just knew. It said:
Do you agree to these terms?
Yes No
You selected:
Yes
Bisecting…
1%
3%
7%
13%
21%
Error
Error
Error
Rerouting…
39%
68%
95%
Complete!
Soul Separation:
Commencing
1%
2%
7%
16%
29%
37%
56%
79%
100%
Complete!
Transfer commencing
100%
Complete!
Enjoy your new body!
Sorry, this short chapter just got me confused.
Writing isnt easy.
I guess just enjoy it and you or we will see how the story turnes out
No it is toooooottaly fine! I probably wouldn't have finished that chapter last night if you hadn't said that. So please keep criticising me. And thank you.
Point out every little detail if you please!
This is a chapter?!
Sorry
I have never written a story. Originally I was gonna write it and then publish it on here, but I didn't know what all my favorite writers used to make the stat menus. I wanted to make the stat menu on here, but I never realized it would attract anyone. So I thought "Oh, well no one will see it and I can have time to write this." but I was definitely wrong. Besides, please don't ask for much. I don't know what I am doing, and this was supposed to be a part of the 3rd chapter but I don't know anything. Honestly, this was an experiment. I really am sorry. I will make longer chapters from now on. But please, keep bugging me about things like this because it will give me more drive to write, besides I need all the criticism I can get. AND my life schedule is very up and down. I am always the last person to be told anything, so if in the middle of a paragraph I seem to loose the topic, it's because I was told me and my family are doing something.
Once again I apologize, not only for this being such a short chapter, but also for my ramblings. Have a great day.