Chapter. 3 |Dragon Dragon Dragon
Hello, yes! I am back. Sorry about the sudden leave everyone! Turns out I had to go out camping, and I went to see the stars! It was really pretty, like a jewel box if you will. I almost wanted to soar the skies! Anyway, I am deeply sorry everyone, I didn't think this would happen... I bet everyone thought I was dropping it, it does tend to happen with new novels after all.
I'm preserving the author notes.
Dragon Dragon Dragon
Sorry I took so long everyone! I also feel like my writing got worse... I am so sorry... I am the worst... I will try to keep posting chapters daily but I don't know how that will work out, my apologies again. Didn't think it would ever happen... I guess that's why people make buffer chapters...
A duo of siscons? Oh my~
Yeah, oh my indeed Tabby. Also we meat again, and so quickly too!
@Rezkin_kdt Ugh.
my neck was struggling to holy my head.
I guess it was supposed to be 'to hold'.
Also, this little sister is so cute! Little sisters must be protected. And... Can I get some headpats too? I got kinda jealous while reading it
I thought I had fixed that... welp... Fixed now, I think...
Maybe later she should grow wings
Dragon girl with dog personality. Just a fact.
nice.
Well this is cute. And floofy. I like!
Something to note for later: If Eri's tail has any significant thickness to it, the she will have problems sitting in vehicles.
Corrections:
(general) Verb tense needs to be consistent, with the exception of dialogue (internal thoughts and talking lines). The English convention is to use past tense.
but I wonder what is she doing?
but I wondered what she was doing.
my neck was struggling to holy my head.
holy --> hold
tell me the body cannot go severe physical changes
go --> undergo
Welcome back and thanks for the chapter!~
I’m so glad to see another chapter of this!
I’m the spoiler tag below is my thoughts about her going out shopping that you can either read as is or maybe apply/reconsider what to do if/when they go out shopping.
Also I don’t entirely know if going out like she is would be a good idea. Sure people might see a cosplayer or someone who might wear an outfit like that but usually the tail wouldn’t move according to their mood and feelings. Plus, consider how easily she jumped when her sister touched her tail, walking in public might be really hard to do. And with her tail and horns, trying on clothes would be hard. And that’s without mentioning that she could easily and accidentally rip through shirts with her horns when trying them on.
posting chapters daily isn't worthwhile, try and post it every 2 or 3 days instead, gives more time to read and proof read etc etc
speaking from personal experience working on my novels
What a coincidence.
*cute dragon tail wagging noises*
Noises!!!!